I gave the story an as much of a go as I could, reading up to chapter 48, but I just can't anymore, the writing quality and sentence structure is abhorrent, which means the editor is either a retard or inexistent. Bit of a shame seen as the story had potential, however I refuse to subject myself to the torture any longer. I honestly can't fathom how it's achieved such a high ranking when it truly doesn't deserve it. I actually feel bad for the lower rated and less viewed stories, that they have been put underneath this steaming mound of shite is rather depressing.