Excellent story, well written, good story progression! I just wish we had more updates! Like 10 or so chapters a day would probably make me happy! lol ?
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I love this novel plot it is perfectly written by the author it has everything that makes me keel reading I would advice people to read it if they like fantasy it has the perfect elements world-building and allGood job author?
I'm the author of this story. I would encourage all readers to give it a chance. My test readers gave me some good reviews, so I thought a larger community would also appreciate it.Please don't forget to rate and review my story, and also let me know if you have any feedback.
So far it's a bit rushed and some parts of the story don't make sense, but it seems to me that this novel has good potential (especially as the author gains more experience), which, together with an author who seems to know how to receive and filter criticism well, makes me think that it might not take long for him to gain experience and that he probably won't abandon this work (at least not anytime soon). In any case, it's not a waste of time to read (even with some of those exaggerated and sometimes somewhat forced Chinese cliches) and I believe that with the addition of chapters it might be something worth adding to your library and reading over time (it's up to you). Despite everything, my meter is closer to decent (for now).
Love this novel, amazing story and writing quality, character development is awsome, all that needs work is the update frequency.
wish fulfilling bookEvents that may have happened in an alternate universe
Okayyy? I think I’m loving this story so far? Michael is annoying though, how could you have a one night stand when you have a girlfriend, and then blame the girl for breaking your relationship?
Hey everyone....This is my first book please give it's lots of love...Well it contains some mature content with lots of romance?If you like the characters please add it to your library and vote for it
I can't review this story past a 1.0 without there actually being a story/chapters to read.
A really great novel with immense potential. I am definitely looking forward to keep reading. A must have in the library. Looking forward to future chapters! Thanks for the hardwork author.
Very good story and I liked the plot very much I see the progression and I'm very hyped for next chapter the mC Is Girl that's also very good choice