MC's stupidity is so bothering I don't know how he is a successful businessman on earth. Maybe they shouldn't say that he is a successful businessman in the first place because of how stupid he is. I also skip chapters because his stupidity makes me uncomfortable. there are so many ways to make the story funny but not in stupid ways. once, twice stupid moves are alright but every chapter is like a "No, No" I'm in chapter 35 now I will update my review if there's an improvement.
MC is smart, atleast in the first few chps...his moments of intelligence was shown, that was dope,,ex: he secretly took over his clan despite being weak....[really hope moments like that continue. show moments of MC using brain,,,would be nice]...he is not stupid, he is ruthless, but not retarded....so yah, thats nice. Hope u dont make MC a show off idiot, [ show in right moments, i suppose]....add some romance, but dont make his lovers useless bitches that love him for his strength or looks, IDK,,make em help and protect MC and ****, u know, and not abandon him for clans and ****.**: MC should kill the princess
This is a good LN, but a little bit rushed though& also world building is way too low, like no street name, no telling how much bigger is his house or is it near forest or how people view him now he passes through streetscharacter background is also non existent.These things make the story in our mind bit more realistic.Again thanks for the chapter.
A very head-strong beginning, an easily understood synopsis, and a fine piece of effort in content. I'll gift this review because the author definitely deserves it and I hope to encourage the author for more updates! ?✔?
Well I drop the story about chap. 120The story starts good with store bullding and has a fun undertone.But the biggest negativ point is the system spirit his so cald Mother, after about 100 chap. Her character is so overbearing that you just can't take it anymore.Than she tell him to kill, and forces the regrets off a other person on him to get him To wake up and take charges of his life.... As if there is no other method out there.... And he just takes it and is OK with it when she has clearly tried and manipulated him.So after 100 chap. The fun and games end and your are trust into a murder fest.I don't chare for the later chap. Anymore his mother's character is just to much for me together with his passiv Betamale attitude and the massiv shifts in the tone of the story in not even 5 chap. I'm dropping this **** like it has the plague.
The characters introduced in the story are all well done. They all have a great personalities and not the copy and paste, vague, 'only there to take up space' personality types. Very good on the authors. The plot is heavily is thought out. Kinda reminding me of Vinland Saga.OMG IM SO STUPID!??? I read this a while back and just now realized I didn't give this a review. I'm sorry author-sama ?????. but please y'all. add this to your reading list. TRUST ME!??