ChaitanyaJaiswal
interesting story line keep updating
i don't want three girls crying over how they are not given attention he loves other girl more emotional f*ck etc
I remember reading how far the worlds merge, does anyone know what chapter it is?
I had one hell of a laugh over this. Not to mention, the story is about a dude with superior tech or something. So a cyborg seems apt. ??
This novel is not even worthy of being called junk food; it's straight trash. It's another reminder of why OP system-type novels are terrible. The main character is stupid, the side characters are dense, the world-building is poor, the pacing is even worse, and the "comedy" isn't funny; it just feels like I'm watching Amy Schumer's horrific stand-up. The glazing on this novel needs to be studied
in the earlier chaps the system is basically bullying the mc.. though i feel bad for laughing the way he responds is way too funny?? jajajaja!!
only read 5 chapters . . . . i wanna read about a magic world , about magic , power , explosion and more ... but novels don't give it me , the story is about anything else except magic , all you will get that this is magic a magic world now deal with it. i don't know maybe I'm too impatient i will write a better one if it gets any good .
I am really enjoying the storyline it's a good read.
The most rubbish story of ever. FL is so weak. ML is so stupid. All I see in this story is FL is so saint. I mean extremely stupid character that doesn't know what is to be hate to other who is extremely cruel to her. All in all I feel extremely stupid my self for reading this.
I'd rather have that tbh
The first arc is so good lol. I don't know how many times ive reread it just because of how great it was.
The second arc is definitely also good but to me it kinda becomes a bit redundant a bit reading through the mtl but it's still one hell of a novel. Also might just be because i was reading the mtl that it felt redundant so don't quote me on that.
Atleast the first part never makes me fail to tear up a bit each time ive reread it.
I'd give it a 9/10 if it wasn't redundant but that could also be the MTL's fault so borderline 10/10. You won't regret reading this, this novel made me question the ranking system for this site lol.
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