ChaitanyaJaiswal
hey I read the story and it is really good and interesting. And author I have a suggestion if you can do it. The suggestion is that can you add brackets for AI like when AI talks can you add brackets like [Add like this ] so it will make it more appealing
51 chapters In and loving the story so far! The characters have been pretty interesting, not going too deep so far but getting to know a few individuals. The academy arc is just kicking off as well, so I’m assuming we will be able to learn even more about the world which has been really compelling.
The way magic works in this world plus the factions is also pretty unique compared to other stories and the main power of the mc just fits so perfectly with his current life style… even if people do have a funny misunderstanding about his uh… ‘interests’ because of it.
But yeah, great read so far I am really enjoying it! Keep up the great work.
So far so good. The writting is consistant and the character is interesting. I cannot wait for more!The only thing that is weird iS that the autors name is 9 dragons and The MC only has 7!?
not good or bad pretty average. I'd keep reading but spending money on this novel isnt really worth it. the dialogue feels stinted and not very fluid. some grammatical errors but they dont really affect much but again if ur gonna pay for a novel it shouldn't have those issues
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Great Book, nice Chapters and good Writing. I am in need of more xDI hope this is Story that will continue for a longer time and i am able to read a great adventure.
The novels have become frivolous, boring, and perverted because of the author. He needs to read my comment just to benefit: the handsome hero with a friendly and kind family, a beautiful and warm mother, a beautiful or domineering sister, a likable and shy little brother, and a strong-hearted father, of course always the hero's family people They are good and enforce the law and love people of course they are angels, you will not find the hero's family of sadistic villains, thieves and murderers. And all the girls in the world of course only who have a dazzling beauty need his help, and those poor little girls feel the responsibility to help and save them, the hero whose biggest concern when he gets super power is to save humanity and the world. Something disgusting and vulgar all the novels have become a deviant character. The reader hates such novels because they have nothing to do with human truth, because they depict angels of peace and love. We wish the authors to change this trivial pattern and show us the true human instincts. Selfishness, anger, murder, theft, arrogance, pride, fraud, deception, impersonal, self-interested, does not care about anyone, does not interfere in the affairs of others, does not help people, this is how the novel will become interesting You will not be able to predict the actions of the characters The events will become unexpected And enthusiastic, and it will bring a new revolution in the field of novels because such a character does not exist. There is one novel that I know is Revenend insanity. I guarantee you the success of your novel even if you are a beginner. Don't make the hero crazy, don't make him stupid, make him only care about his interests
It might not be for everyone, but I enjoy these types of overpowered novels. I'd like to see how the MC gets through his predicament, so I hope they'll continue translating the story.
There are alot of isekai references on this novel but for me, the MC is really hilarious xD It might look cliche but I like how the author deliver the plot and since the MC is an otaku, of course he had some advantage on his part but he looks like a chuunibyou for me xDThe title of the novel is really eye-catching and the synopsis is really good. Looks simple but it's quite a fun to read. Keep up on writing! ^_^
whoa~ calm down MC?when I read the second paragraph of the first chapter, the MC's personality is already showing and I love her for that. Throughout the chapter, I enjoyed it very much. You're the best, author for making me chuckle??✨
bruuh. i was just a mere passerby trying a new book but this book got me hooked immediately. it is very refreshing to see a book with victorian-style setting among system and VR novels nowadays and i like this. for the writing style, 'luxurious' is the only term i can come up with, with how the author can make simple words sound extravagant. the explanation of power structure is easy to digest even for a noob reader like me. and the biggest plus of all is i like the author's sense of humor. kekekekeboth protagonists are OP and completed each other with how one is very cool and calm-headed, and the other is passionate and fiery. as the author said, two is better than one, indeed.action? check. mystery? check. sassy humor? check. a subtle hint of romance (cough)? check. everything i like are packed into this, so i'm excited for moree.this is a must read book. give this book a chance guys, and you'll see what i mean. keep up the good job author! ^^
How can he have a godzilla and hide? ???This doesn't make sense?.... ...... ..... .. .... ..... . .... ...... ....... ......... ..... ... .. .. ... .... ...... . ?
