MC's stupidity is so bothering I don't know how he is a successful businessman on earth. Maybe they shouldn't say that he is a successful businessman in the first place because of how stupid he is. I also skip chapters because his stupidity makes me uncomfortable. there are so many ways to make the story funny but not in stupid ways. once, twice stupid moves are alright but every chapter is like a "No, No" I'm in chapter 35 now I will update my review if there's an improvement.
Okay so. I like the idea of the apocalypse (in story form) but you seriously need to make a better language edit before you post it. The character is good and I see potential so good luck!! And hope to see more chapters from you.
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The story is original and kinf of interesting but the MC is too much, he is dense and always act to prove the author's ideas no matter of the consistency.So the story is resultoriented and as the author don't care about consistencies and nonesenses, the story flow is unnatural, forced, boring.English isn't my 1st language so that's why mistakes in the writing that insert contradictions is disturbing for me... I'm not stupid so i can understand what the author mean but it's repeatitive mitake so it's TIRING!!! I'm not a tranlator... why should i translate it anyway, it's not my job, FFS!
