madbuha
I agree and I am dropping as well.
Don't remind me of his narcism dude???
please update more chapters??
Ps: please author/translator double time please your updates of chapters .. its so exciting to read ... ?❤
Your writting is superb. More so better than mine. I like how one could clearly build the images. You really have your way with words.
Please continue with your work without holding back.
Better than the first version cant wait for the new chapters to come after author uploads the old chapters
Just started reading, the story has an interesting premise and a relatable MC. The story immediately starts without making us have to wait around, which I like. The magic system is interesting and explained well to the reader. The MC's abilities seem interesting and unique. Will continue reading with interest!
I've contemplated making this review for a couple days now.
I usually rate fairly, as in how good translation, character, etc. was. But I can't do that for this novel.
This novel has a 1 free chapter every 3 premium chapters release type. What this means is that if the story ends around chapter 2320, it'll have 1400 premium chapters (because premium started around chapter 220), that all cost between 10-24 spirit stones with an average of 14. Reason I bring this up is because it's about 2300 chapters and ongoing. What that means is that the story has to be worth that huge amount of money for us readers to spend on it.
I thought it was kinda worth it up till this point.
You see, a couple chapters ago, a person did something the MC couldn't do. Said thing is the thing that makes the MC stand out, because the MC is the only one that's supposed to be able to do this thanks to his "Xianxia-Boi Luck ". Because even though MC is more or less a monster in terms of power when compared to people in the best military academies, he couldn't even scratch the weakest point of a literally born seconds ago super-creature when the MC had all geno points other than super, as well as pobably all sacred buffs and gear that's available in the first sanctuary as well. Keep in mind that the brain is only slightly easier to damage than an eyeball, so if he couldn't even put a scratch on the newborn super creature, and it only got more powerful as the minutes ticked by, how is he supposed to hurt or even kill it even if its head was cracked open.
However despite all this backstory to how powerful these supercreatures are, this one person killed an ***** super creature, that was injured, with the help of a couple hundred regular evolvers. Which is like you fighting an attack helicopter to the death, in an open field, whilst you have absolutely nothing but your own arms and legs, whilst the heli has 2 veteran pilots, 5 veteran gunners as well as infinite ammo, food, fuel and the heli won't experience wear or is affected by any weather.
As you might understand, it is physically impossible to win such a fight. However, the writer decided that there was nothing wrong with the end result of this fight being you winning.
The fact that the one who killed the super creature is a female also only means one thing, that they are basically the main love interest for this story and whatever person MC is currently together with will probably fade away in importance. Also, the MC appears to be monogamous, so i don't know how this has Harem tag.
There's also the fact that the MC will start getting super geno points from fruit in the future as well. (I personally don't really care for how MC get's stronger, but I know that there's plotholes with this way of him getting stronger)
So, with this information, are you willing to spend a couple hundred bucks on this story? I know I sure as **** don't. In fact, I want a refund of the 3400-5300 spirit stones that I've already spent on this story.
P.S. when I write a review, it's because I've either finished the story or have lost all faith in the story fixing its mistakes, ie. given up on it.
Cosmic professional gladiator
I had to drop this novel around chapter 66. Up until that point in the novel, I had some minor complaints with the overall story but once Li Fei was introduced into the story, the MC's personality took a complete 180 and I could not stand it anymore. I do not know if the novel and/ or MC improves in the future but if it is 4000 chapters of what I've read thus far, count me out.
An absolutely magnificent story! It was scary and sad and well thought out. The characters were very - human. I loved it!
If she is so adamant about repaying people for their help, then she should just give them monetary compensation but she should not be betraying Jackson for everybody else! This is so unreasonable because on one hand you show us that Serenity doesn’t want to hurt Jackson and that she has no feelings
