Not very interesting in the first twenty chapters. No real dream training, very non specific system, leveling etc. Characters are ok, a little bit flat but it is only 20 chapters in . But there something missing if this was a meal it would be a small salad instead of a nice full course.
Extremely Good hope it’s Not dropped
Please don’t drop the story is very well written and has a lot of potential
This MC does everything a person with a cheat/system should not do. Showing off, exposing his supreme talent, face slapping... yada yada yada. And then everyone obviously targets him. Lame af. If you can’t stay low profile then he might as well kilp himself in the beginning and be done with it ffs.
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The synopsis make this seem like a very intresting concept, so i gave it a read and i could not read chapter 3. I forcefully finished chapter 2. I believe it's the writing style or maybe the huge info dump. Chapter 1 was very intriguing and made me want to find out more but chapter 2 killed the intrigue i held for this book. Cant say more since i could not read more.?
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First of all there is a lot of Netorare so if you are not comfortable with that do not read this. The story itself is ok but nothing really stands out so far besides the NTR aspects.
Definite 5 stars, I knew I struggled and still am with writing, but for your first time, it blew me away. Crisp and direct, which is a major downfall of mine, I find this utterly fascinating to read. Spot in my library for sure ! MC shows character in every nuance of his actions, and I find it appealing to spectate him.Storyline may seem cliche, but to future readers, do not try to skip over it without reading first. It is a polished gem.World background was given, which is plenty for now. Reminds me slightly of King’s Avatar tho.All in all, infatuated and doubly impressed ! Kudos to you author, and I hope you continue writing with fervor !
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I am caught up with the Translations! Hear me out! This was not meant to be a serious story but a funny one.This is actually not bad. Yes the beginning was terrible, also terrible world building... I've read 60 chapters but it feels like 200 with little progress. But read this for the Characters! Honestly, there's still hope Author can turn this around. It's frustrating because there's too little information so I can't really ascertain anything. To like this Novel is a gamble. It'll either be BS conclusion or not.