Really love this book and it's only been 5chapters? So far MC has shown to be level headed and somewhat? street smart. Sadly MC hasn't met ML yet so I'm REALLY looking forward to it.?Praying author-san updates soon and dedicates to finishing this novel??The writing quality is pretty good, a few errors though but it doesn't take away from enjoying the story. Also I hope that the future chapters elaborate more on the world's background. Overall, I can see a strong foundation being built for an amazing story.?
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This is my first review here so i will try make it short and on the point, This 15 years old MC is with the memory of a 30 years old special force kind of a freak , he can be patient but he can't help becoming a lolicon, what a hypocrite Mc and his cliché reasoning!!! Right?, he gets angry easy dispite of his special force Experience of some brat with his 21 century civilised hiritage of earth, this protagonist is an embrassement to all earthling readers here, shame on you pervert MC.
We have a lot authors doing real good these days, huh! Anyways I really appreciate the style of writing and of course I would love to see more chappies soon.. There are a few mistakes but they don't really count...Dear fellow author you're already doing well.Happy writing!!
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It was neat ?u200d♂️?u200d♂️?u200d♂️ The synopsis will make you curious about what will happen and when you read it you'll wonder why the monster was in the sunset stables. I wonder what will the MC do ?? anyways, great start author ?