KarmaRunehYb
this is very good novel although I have only read 25 chapters till now but I enjoyed it very much. story itself is unique and way author has presented it is amazing. writing quality is good. although Mc's personality ispersonally very frustratingly annoying to me but even after that he is enjoyable and others character are also good. novels itself is very high quality so just enjoy it.
I need another assurance, sorry for being too paranoid...there won't be any Netorare or Netorase right? it's just the protagonist doing the stealing right? the synopsis does explain that system helps him NTR other people, but talking about the story in general, there won't be any future Netorare/Netorase right?
this novel could be considered as one of the first ones I ever read related to business category, and it gave me an everlasting flavor. It actually differs from the business category as it adds superpower taste to it, not like those protagonists have some kind of space and whatnot...characters are going to be introduced implicitly gradually without your knowledge, I mean the building of characters is great, for instance you'll know the story of the mother of our FL later on, not at the beginning, and the existence of the half-brother and half-sister of our FL, everything is happening gradually step by step and you'll get engrossed in it later on, as for our ML, the author gives us a glimpse of hi at the beginning and you'll figure him out gradually, as for romance, I think it happens later on as I couldn't wait for updates but the latest thing i can remember is somewhat related to both ML and FL as some guardian of our FL helps 'revive' the grandpa of ML, yup I stopped here cuz I finished reading it as it was new at that time and I don't know if the novel is still going on...still try reading it guys!!!!!!
I like how the story flows. There are not many cliches even though this is a system Apocalypse novel. If you combine these 2 genres then you will probably see many same types of outcomes but different types of titles. Very satisfied as of now.
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good read, but very hard to follow. would suggest getting proofreader to help, way to many errors. but overall good job hopefully you start updating again soon
everything was good. the character describing and world background was great. but for starting it was really full of sadness. it really impressed me that iremembered my bad memories. hope your novel get better ranking.
Love the story so far and gonna keep reading.Only downside i see is that a 33 year old is not supposed to be like he is at the beginning even without all the caliber issues
Yo, I’m going to say it, this is the next RSSG. The this book is really good. Everyone has to give power stones. I’m already hooked on this book? only thing I can see, is that it’s missing some elements to make the book more full. It dwells a bit empty? Idk the right words but I’ll write another review when I find them
Not to be that guy, but what happened to "my first time is reserved for Sophie".
This novel is a hidden gem. I never read a novel who do the reincarnated in a game this way. The heroines are really fun and the mc is fighting for his live.The mc actually uses his knowledge to get powerful without to depend on his system. The system is more like a map that show him hints how to act and doesn’t make him op without instantly.Now to the bad part of the story. The grammar and structure are sometimes really bad. It doesn’t make the story unreadable but it do make it confusing sometimes. The author knows it and is re-editing his novel. It gets better in the later chapters and you can see how the author keeps improving. Maybe the author could think about getting a editor to help him with the grammar.Overall I’m very happy to find this novel and hopefully it gets the recognition it deserves.
Just stumbled upon it started reading and read through 154 trying find more chapter. Really like the development. Waiting for more chapters.Great book if you looking for fun read.
