Just caught up with this wonderful story. Writing Quality: Great writing but could use some passes before putting up. Nothing really bad, some wrong words, misspelling and wrong words, used here and there and using a different name for the MC which was sort of confusing.Stability of Updates: Just got caught up so I don't know the schedule for uploads.Story Development: Started off as simple VR-game with MC at a low point in his life. Then evolved with lots of mysterious undercurrents moving in the background that the MC is slowly figuring out as he progresses.Character Design: The MC has a past that he has to face, with all the past mistakes he has made. MC is a person who can look back at his past mistakes and realize that he messed up really bad. He also likes to play solo and doesn't like to play with people, trust issues. He loves his family. The other players act like players and do stuff that players would do. NPCs aren't truly NPCs, but that comes with the genre. The MCs family has a LOT of DRAMA.World Background: The real world is expansive and far into the future. The game world has unique levels, each with their own rules and laws. The people controlling the game have an agenda/goal that they want, but we don't know yet. Everything is bleeding over into the real world and the MC is trying to prepare.
