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Quite comprehensive!Has some aspects of some of the greatest novels on wn like shadow slave, dual cultivation and genetic ascension.Am hyped for the future.
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I don’t have much to say at the moment. Will be updating this at chapter 50. It is quite a nice novel this far. It could use someone peer reading and helping fix minor mistakes, but otherwise its got potential. A major recommendation is to put a ranking system. Though this might not work depending on how the systems align across planets. If you do put recommend a spoiler at the top of said info page.:)
"Carl, come on, you don't want to be here forever right?"
"God Realm : Light and Dark"
Whether it's physical or whatever, and of course they will hire professional people who are ready to laugh crazy no matter how funny and cringe the joke is, they will laugh madly and take out their kecak dance moves.
Tsk... azentot, I miss Yu-chan already...
Hey man don't kill Sakumo he's a good character
"Well, I just started singing because my GoA audience insisted until I lost my temper. I'm not going to abandon them just because of it, "I say.
'Hello? What are you thinking about?', Adrian was so concerned about me. It's been difficult to talk to Adrian about my fears.
As Shuri said this, Ultron seemed to come to that realization. Slowly, his face began to shift from determination, to realization, to humor. Rearing his head back, he began to laugh. Rolling over on his back, he continued to belt out a chorus of chuckles, his torso hiccupping as he grew more hysterical.