Story is very engaging with system but sometimes the plot confuses me
Here we are back at Sarthak's novel.So... The latest few chapters have not been my cup of tea. By that, I mean that the whole "Lucifer" thing. Nonetheless, the next few chapters are a tad interesting.They expanded more on the lore and had development. Sarthak clearly likes his world building. Morgan's getting weirder, but at least Glen's there. I suggest the author add some moments of introspection. The more he writes, the somewhat better his skills become. That's all I'm gonna say for now.
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One of the best Isekai so far that didn't involve truck-kun. it goes far to beat my expectations and good plot so far. slow growth and development but the book could use a little more editing in the punctuation mark aspect. not much complain in the tense aspect but still 7.5/10
Free chapters are definitely worth it. MC’s abilities, while overpowered, have well-set initial limitations and are fairly unique.
This story is very good so far and I look forward to reading more in the future! The main character is really relatable and I’m excited to learn more about his mysterious past.
nice.....................................
I am writing this after reading up to chapter 16.The story is interesting and has some new concepts. The plot progression is slow but only up to the point when the author is explaining about the System and the status window. I have read many System novels but only a small number of them actually details about the Status Screens. This novel is one of them!Then there is the world building. Honestly, the number of chapters is still less to tell exactly how good the world building is but from they way the author described the village, I can tell they would do a good job in this field.There are many good things about the novel like daily updates, good writing quality and a nice description of everything. But let's also talk about some drawbacks. One could say that the story is moving very slowly but I am a LOTM reader so I like the pace. The one thing you should work on is to give some ups and downs to the story to make it more interesting.Although I say that, keep doing what you're doing as I can see it improving as the new chapters come in. I like the novel and will continue reading it?. I hope it keeps on getting better and better...
I will give the 5 star it deserves... Read it you will come to love it.
A bit of a repetition in terms of story setting, but some interesting twists to the concept, plus Alexander the Great is a wild addition to the lore. Definitely curious to see where this will go. Also, Isekai galore + system.
This book. If you're bored of reading your normal and very common stories them this book was meant for you.cliffhangers, exciting adventures, sacarsm that would blow your mind and most of all comedy???I recommend that you join Asriel on his quest to dominate the world.
Pretty good start. The concept is good. Author has already put some mysteries. I hope the wait will be worth it. I am adding it. But hope author don't disappoint me