Away

its a very good novel but the only problem i have is the super slow story like from chapter 200 to 300 only a few days have passed...................................

very bland writing.it is  not a system/ farming novel .it just a unsuccesful wish full filling novel. mc bought a gf from video streaming site just because she wears non modern dress. but after getting 20 k she ready to sleep together and moved with him.us readers feels Jo emotion from reading first 20 chapters.

You gotta restructure your first few chapters or something, because the entire time I’m reading this, it feels like he’s sharing his girl with his friend.

WONDERFULLlovely, i love it, but the PLOT TWISTS AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH (i love them too)

I loved the description and I am loving the story so far. the idea I fascinating. Great plot ?

I love it!! I love it!! I love it!! I love it!! I love it!! I love it!! I love it!! More plz! More plz! More plz! More plz! More plz! More plz! More plz! More plz! More plz! More plz! More plz! I love it!! I love it!! I love it!! I love it!! More plz! More plz! More plz!