Warning for readers, chapter 5 is missing. What is currently in its place is the extra story 5. I’m not sure if chapter 5 is missing as chapter 6 doesn’t seem to miss anything as a continuation to chapter 4. It doesn’t spoil much as it is just an extra but it does ruin the feeling.
It starts off great but, after a while, it just becomes a giant history book with entirely too much detail. It progresses really slowly and while I'm a fan of background info, there's just too much and it's on some really insignificant stuff. It's a wasted week waiting on a chapter of useless, nonprogressive information that doesn't help the story at all.
I love you
Good One
Any recommendation about hollywood fanfic?
I tried to like this novel. I really did. I could not even reach chapter 10 before I got tired of it.
It’s not that it’s bad. The writing is not bad. It’s just boring. After 9 chapter nothing interesting happened. He was too happy. Too perfect. Too boring.
Read every chapter, by far one of my favorite chapters. The ending was abrupt though, Tim's story wasn't wrapped up, neither any of the yellow dragon stuff. didn't get to see any immortal worlds, etc. It felt like the author just wanted to end it when it definitely had at least 500 more chapters of plot left in it. I'm sad to see the end honestly. I love this novel so much
305 chapters yet only one comment……suspicious yet I’m gonna take the bite. I’l let y’all know how it goes!
I'm only at the start but that's how infuriating reading this is.The author does not know how to balance "You are OP but bad things will happen". You have to let time for the good things to take effect before the next bad thing happens. What the heck was the point of giving the MC points just to take it away so soon? The whole being late thing was so ridiculous I dropped it there and then.And the way the bad things are written..getting aggroed thanks to his friend is not a good way to do it. The worst part is this seems like it's gonna be a consistent problem!I seriously don't know why people recommend this but I would like to be enlightened. Cause at this point, only a masochist would continue reading.
Yes I give my book a review becaus I like it ?
So i have started this story, and i am not sure if i am willing to put in time to read it.Mainly pointing towards the use of grammar and messy paragraphs all along since the get go.All i can see tho from the reviews, it's super overrated, grammar is leaning towards machine translations, even if it is not. just to put a perspective on it.Main character is quite a fresh thing, not what is usual for mc's to build on, i like the start of the story but. it's a major turn of with the grammar and how quick paced it is. No offence to author.
Worth taking the time to read .?.Worth taking the time to read .?.Worth taking the time to read .?.Worth taking the time to read .?.Worth taking the time to read .?.
Underwhelming novel that fails to deliver on what was an initially interesting premise. The plot progression isn't interesting and deviates from the initial premise to turn into the typical novel with a mc being controlled by some higher power to put on a show for them. Giving such a low rating because it wasted such an interesting premise, which really disappointed me.