THE REINCARNATION OF THE SUPREME RULER OF TIME AND SPACE

Often on this app stories are interesting but poorly written. This story is captivating and written like a real novel

Solid novel ruined by the author trying too hard to force meaningful character development by having a flawed mc at the start. Character development is good, but making mc do so much stupid stuff early on so he can improve later is really annoying.

idk but the story is too fast, the system is so confusing and not too detail about the skill. psychologically speaking I think you disregard the parent condition coz a three years old is missing, i know they know that their child is in his master but you destroy the relationship between parent and child psychologically speaking. the story is already a mess and the plot is straight forward without twist. at early story you made him almost godlike.

Underwhelming novel that fails to deliver on what was an initially interesting premise. The plot progression isn't interesting and deviates from the initial premise to turn into the typical novel with a mc being controlled by some higher power to put on a show for them. Giving such a low rating because it wasted such an interesting premise, which really disappointed me.

a great story but very confusing had to drop since i found my self confused and questions unanswered, it would make for a very good story but i think it was poorly executed.

PLEASE VOTE FOR ME AND PROVIDE YOUR SUPPORT FOT THE NOVEL.HOPE YOU ALL LOVE THE WORLD OF MRMKINDLY COMMENT BELOW, TO ENABLE  ME TO RATE MY OWN WORK