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a VERY intriguing plot... the synopsis does its job of attracting the readers and the very first chapter makes you know the characters which to me is very interesting. Looking forward to completing the read.
This book has taken a unique turn and I am very much inteigued to find out where this goes. As for the 4-star review in writing, I feel like even though the author doesn’t make noticeable grammatical errors, he could improve in his overall flair. This book has been in my library since the first 10 chapters and I hope the author continues to grow
I had run through thousands of inspector, civilian, and buildings with all kind of vehicle ranging from normal car, big truck, monster truck, heavy duty truck, even bicycle. And now you're telling me I could do more and wouldn't have to responsible for it???!!!
That's me and this is a review of my own work so I'll give it all stars and apologize if the novel isn't good as I'm not very good at Literature and English. I plan to write the work in Vietnamese but I'm afraid that Google translates incorrectly and the chapter will be a bit slow because I'm still studying, this fanfic I wrote to satisfy my passion, I hope you understand. . Thanks very much♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️
As of now, it's actually pretty good. Original idea, a baby raised by a dragon basically. Plus the baby is a Transmigrator. So yeah, got my vote so far.
At first glance, this novel is just like any other novel Xianxia, an MC seeking power in a world filled with dangerous beasts and selfish cultivators.However, what is different here is that the MC is not a super genius with a cheat cultivating technique that overpower everybody, don't get me wrong, he is strong and has some cool OP skills, but he won't get an easy time in his journey.Expect to see an MC facing hardships, committing mistakes, and struggling to overcome stronger foes, and expect as well see him growing.PS.: This is my first attempt at writing, so the beginning is no as good as it should be, but I promise that the quality is improving in real-time.PS2.: English is not my first language, and it had been 10 years since I last studied grammar properly, so you may see some grammar problems, but I am back studying English and these problems will be fixed in time.Give a chance to this novel, leave a comment and review.And thanks to all of you who read this novel.
Bro keeping going nice work, so don't drop it I will support your work fully.Really a nice work.The story is pretty good and the character is also very good.
I gave this a try, I really did. But after finishing the prologue (chapter 17), I just didnt have any interest to continue reading. A lot of stuff at the beginning is so confusing and nothing is explained. It leads to a ton of guess work, and even then its difficult to keep track of stuff. It’s hard to tell if the author just didnt want to explain the stuff and expected it to be understood, or if they were trying to make it sound interesting.
This is the second novel that I am writing after reading lots of villian and antihero stories because I also wanted to write one. you will definitely be surprised by this book’s new and different touch on villian genre and hopefully it will keep you entertained. ??
It’s hard to put into words how much I enjoy this story. wang wei as a main character is phenomenal him understanding himself while acknowledging his faults as a person to grow is done so well. he’s op yet not to the point where there is no one to challenge him from getting stomped by di tian or the fella born from two great emperors in the most recent chapters whos as of now more powerful than him while being in the same generation gives his strength more depth along with the fact that he has to go through hundreds to thousands of years of cultivation despite his overwhelming talent compared to some mcs who in their own verse are 20 year olds fighting old monsters millions of years old like no big deal. His confidence in himself is somthing I also enjoy.The world building is the thing I enjoy the most by far. The way you crafted the universe to allow uncountable numbers of power systems each to their own heavenwill world is marvelous. The lore of the myriad emperor world is also somthing I love. When they talk about the past eras and the truth of how they played out its makes me want to know more. The way you’ve combined basically every eastern fantasy cultivation system into this story without it seeming forced but the natural order of things is great. If there’s anything lacking about them is that there seems to be a lack of soul cultivators considering it’s one of the three principles that make up cultivation systems it seems strange we haven’t encountered any or a sect that focuses on the souls and ways to attack and utilize it to a extreme. The romance and side characters are a strong suit. everyone in this great generation competing to become the next eternal emperor they all have their own motives and goals there own dreams and families counting on them to live up to their expectations. It’s funny seeing how you characterize someone like Lin Fan being a classic cultivation main character coming from a lower world with great talent and a harem. wang weis relationship with wu Hong is also something I enjoy her mystery and his insecurities in the relationship while still loving her and having to deal with them. Li Jun is also the goat fr. Now after praising the story to the high heavens to mention the only glaring fault I have with the story. The grammar, while by no means bad or unreadable there are moments where it has broke me out of my immersion because I have to check if I read somthing wrong only to find the wrong word. This isn’t something common and has only happened to me a couple times in the story and in the last 50 chapters hasn’t happened at all or at least that I’ve noticed. Overall 10/10 cant wait for the next chapters.
I actually enjoy this story and hope that it gets picked