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its a nice one but please update it a little faster ?
Great , continue this novel is good one of the best novels I have ever read for please keep updating and don’t drop it .Sssssswwswwswwwwwawwswwwwwswssswwwwwwswswwswwsw
I had this book in my library for a little while. I finally click on it and see it says GreyBlueSparrow followed by a date. It’s on another one of your books too. I’ honestly pretty curious about that.
The plot and characters are well developed.The storytelling is also very interesting,it captures your attention as soon as you start reading it.
All in all I find this to be an immature wish fulfillment story that hardly if any actual worth. I recommend you avoid this story unless that's what you're looking for.
The other reviews don’t do this master piece justice. This is a top tier gem, it’s funny as fuxk and seriously reading it gives you goosebumps. I’m telling you the MC is hella scheming, this guy be playing all sort of grandpas and he has OP ability too. if u like smart mc that stays low-key while playing everyone like a dog then this is for you
It seems interesting Author.. ?? Waiting for more of this book❤️❤️ Waiting .. waiting... And ya , All the Best ... We are always there to support you.. ❤️❤️Love you .. ?
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Writing Quality 5Stability of Updating 5Story Development 5 Character Design 5World background 5Fantastic = action, romance, and drama, give them 100/100 each
So far this little story has some attention of mineMost novels only focus on the MC but this one like Overlord, it has deepth and backgrounds for side characters and the world itself I would like to have some suggestions such as adding things that other novels don’t so that it will make your novel stands out and unique Keep it up I will give you 2 stone per day
This looks like it's going to be goooooood I cannot wait to read this book I was drawn in by the synopsis. I so hope I'm not disappointed ??
