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Things are getting more intense here ?I never would have suspected that his true identity is this!
I enjoy the story line a lot!!! Love the characters and thier stories. This story only needs a good strong edited pass through! I enjoy the story!
Nice book and intriguing characters . the plot development is nice and the pacing is excellent too
Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?
I’m not usually a systems novel reader, I like cringy romance. But this is really good writing. If you like systems this one’s a goodie. ?
why does every action between male/female have to turn sexual?carrying cos there's no choice or waking up and stretching. Would be awesome if this random occurrence actually could be imagined as random, and not EVERY SINGLE TIME!
There are some weird problems with the writing and i have no idea what the chapter release schedule is so it seems low but if that gets fixed i would have ranked it about 4.2 so yea, you should give it a try.And any information when you plan on posting new ch mister author?
This is remarkable!!!Will definitely recommend this book!
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Hi, everyone! This is your author. I'm sorry for reviewing this haha! But I just want to tell everyone that please! Don't open the premium chapters, chapters 22 to 24. The chapters next to Chapter 6. I made a mistake. Hopefully, my editor will help me. That's all. If you see that the said chapters were already deleted, just disregard this review. Haha! Anyway, I hope you enjoy this. Your thoughts are welcome!
I’l shamelessly give this fiction a nice round 5.
Mistory cover and interesting story I add this book into my library
