SamuelOkun
I’m giving five stars just for how cool the idea is. I could think of so many different types of animal fusions that would be cool and I want to know what the author could come up with too.
I really like all your stories , but this one is better for me ! Please , update more often . .............................................................
Sigh... I have yet to finish your other novels how will I read these new ones o(TヘTo) Sigh.... so many sigh... I need to read, but I need to finish your other stuff as well. sigh...
I like the story......................
Interested in the story, saved to library
Its terrible, the grammer alone gave me a headache. There isn’t any real explanations either and it’s laden with so much plot armor, Its like the author can’t be helped to come up with a proper start to the story and wants to immediately jump into the middle. it might not be so bad if there where proper translators.
Nice plot, the story is perfectly paced and the characters are really likeable. Frudi is still my favorite so far. Can't wait to read more and see how this turns out.
Author, when you do scene breaks, system information etc.. can you please use less '-' '=' etc? You don't really need that many of them to denote a break/transition. For those of us that use audio feature it is extremely painful to hear "minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus minus " listen to a few sentences only to have it repeat again... and again...
I really like this authors work, in a short he flushed put his charectors and world, I do hope he expands on the world a bit more
a great storyline , keep up the nice work...
Diceeeeeeeevrrrrrrr why are you so bad at writing ? Don't you know your supposed to post 100 chaps a day like a slave if I don't get enough chapters I swear to god I'll feed you to the fairies it's your fault for writing a good novel that I have to jack off every 4 hours to calm my craving for your novel
I read till 300 . I will be honest to develop a character taking 300+ chapters is too much. 300 chapter and lots of things happened but time moves fking slow. writing quality is average because of constant switching between povs.Most annoying thing is slow progression and stupidity of mc not to level up. I don't understand why some idiots tried to compare this with The Author's Pov . it can't even come close to it.ONLY good thing about this novel is story has potential but author does best job in ruining it.I'm complaining because of time wasted to read till here hoping it would get better but never did.
