SamuelOkun
This book was a real page-turner! I couldn't put it down. The atmosphere was incredibly dark and suspenseful, and the twists and turns kept me guessing until the very end. The characters were complex and intriguing, and the writing was sharp and atmospheric. Highly recommend it to fans of action, anti hero.
The start is interesting, one of few i cause say that stand out, good pacing, immersion is dangerous I almost finished all the uploaded chapters in one sitting
I will be frank I have read 40 ch till now and I can say it's fairly entertaining and intriguing, and I would like to see where this go I am especially waiting for more interaction with og character and academy arc which I hope will done. I believe the majority of base building is done and now the story will move in that direction. Will be looking forward for this
Please keep it coming author ,I don't like the suspense ?♥️♥️
Hi fellow newbie!I’ve really enjoyed seeing where you’ve taken this so far. I’m curious to see what comes next. Remember, don’t give up—I’m here to keep your spirits up!Oh, and if you have a moment, could you check out my book? It’s a fantasy adventure titled Bellator: Rising. The story follows a hero’s journey in a world I’ve meticulously crafted from the ground up. You’ll discover a unique mana system, intriguing species, various countries, and rich cultures, each with their own religions and laws.This is my first book, and I’m genuinely eager to get some feedback. Whether you’re an experienced writer or just a fan of fantasy, your insights could really help me improve. I’d love to hear your honest opinions!Thanks so much for considering giving it a read.Best, IkarisP.S. Your feedback would mean the world to me!
So far it’s ok.
Good Story ..................................................................................................................................
This book is amazing,i am loving it . Thanks author.
Read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love this novel! Please don’t drop author! I love this novel! Please don’t drop author! I love this novel! Please don’t drop author! I love this novel! Please don’t drop author! I love this novel! Please don’t drop author!
the story got me hooked , hope it continues , even though it hasn't been updated :(
After reading more chapters since our first review, it's safe to say things have taken an interesting change of pace.So, Morgan's ability to separate his soul seems to tell me that he's going to be extremely difficult to take down. That's not a negative thing. I just hope Sarthak knows about adaptability. The dialogue between characters isn't half bad, especially when it involves the MC.I feel like that narrative's a tad brisk and some scenes are melodramatic. There's no particular wronging in this, though, since the story's still in its initial stages. Like, Sarthak's world-building is commendable.Couldn't help but notice that his writing gets better with each new chapter released. It's engaging enough, and he delivers some solid descriptions for the action scenes. Makes the dialogue flow naturally.P.S. If I see the name "Cassius" one more time in a book, I'm closing it.
