I have read up to 40 chapters. I can't read more cause I'm broke but anyway let me list out the things that I like: There are little to no grammatical errors. So you can pretty much read it smoothly.The world-building is great. The author set it up really well. There is no big info dumps about the world. At least for me, the author made the information about the world digestible. It didn't feel like explaining the world as if it's a textbook, explaining it for the sake of explaining but it feels like an adventure. This can be seen in the background of the MC. Instead of just simply explaining his background for one chapter or a paragraph, the author did a good job makin us curious about MC's background and showing it bit by bit instead of one big infodump. So for the people who read the first few chapters and think that the MC is stupid, bare with it as it will be explainin soon why he thought of it that way.MC: The MC is kinda developing in the first 40 chapters. You will know his morality, his priorities, his goal, and his character. If you're looking for a character that is calculative and will sacrifice anyone for his own goal, then no this is not a novel for you. The MC here is stupidly honest which is kinda refreshing. He can easily emphasize with anyone. Knows when he's fcked up and trying to adapt to this new world. He doesn't seem like a hypocrite so far.For the side characters:I'm liking the side characters so far, there might be cliches on them but the dialogs seem like something can come out from a human. I don't know how developed are they because I've only read up to chapter 40 but I'm already liking some of them. The things that I don't like:There are very slight spoilers ahead so be warned. They aren't big revelations. One of them is already in the tags lol. He has a system and it seems like he's the only one who has it. I like novels that has system if everyone has it, if it's only the MC I kinda don't like cause it undermines the future achievements of the MC. You can't help but sometimes think "If I have a system, then I'm pretty sure I can also do it." It doesn't make the MC special. It doesn't feel like he earned it. Yeah, you can say that the system didn't give it in a silver platter but you can also see how much of an advantage having a system is. Also, how can you say he's special if there's no one you can compare it to (i.e. other people having systems too). HOWEVER, that's the genre of the book so that's on me for reading it (I'm actually kinda hoping that everyone has the same system but yeah).The one that I dislike is him having a skill just by opening a book. This is just OP. I'm pretty sure we can all agree that he didn't earn it. For me, the appeal of weak to strong is the grind. And you can't remove hard work from grinding so if someone can earn a skill by just simply opening a book although it cost pain (which is just a few sentences) I'm sorry but I can't see the hard work there. I'm hoping that it's just an early boost but I would respect the author's decision and hope they have a better plan for it. But hey that's just me and if you like the MC having that skill then read it and I recommend you to read it cause it's really good this is just me not liking a small part of it. Don't let a random guy ruin what you like. TL;DRThis book is really great, Great World Building, Great Writing quality, Consistent Updates, Good story development, Great MC but a little bit of nitpick on some things that are related to the MC, would really recommend it to others.
bruh, hayzzz i'm too annoyed to make a critical review, hayzzz.
Does this have yuri without the MC? Not really a fan of polyamory, so I try to avoid any novels that have the g!rls sleeping around with each other without the MC.
It is an excellent book for anyone who likes ''EVIL MC''. Don't hesitate because of the low rating, the story is solid, the problem for some is the spelling errors, but it doesn't justify such a low rating for such a good novel.
Chinese novel that contain chinese cultivation keep saying that there are Gods and Demon but the Gods doesn't have authority or title according to their power and what type of God he or she is. The God and Demon are basically cultivator instead pf a actual God or Demon. Just like novel that contain the Prehistoric. There is Jade Emperor and his gods and they call themselves God but they are just cultivator instead of an actual God. Can someone please tell me why they are call God even though they are basically just Cultivator.
i describe the book in one sentence,something out of a teenager fantasy, some random loser get a cheat and became a god,the plot of over 99% of the books, there is no weight in the story, there is no weight in any of the characters, the characters only have 3 jobs in the book,first provided mc with a op to face slap them,2 be smashed by mc and increase his power,3 be amazed by the action of the mc,there is literally no other purpose for any of the mcs,the mc is a hypocrite,he has a problem with Villain's because they wanted to kill him but want to destroy them because they are bad(makes you wonder why only bad guy's wants mc dead)the only reason he is fighting them is because of power but he continually came up with some righteous bullshit to justify his action, there is no weight in any of his decisions,he doesn't face any consequences for his actions, all he cares is power,in other word the entire world revolve around mc(which is a sign of a bad story)(any one who is with mc,is good guy,and any one who fight with the mc is a bad guy),power system is meaning less,why bother care about any ability he has when a new one will replace literally 2 chapter away,bruce lee said i am not afraid of a man who knew 1000 technique i am afraid of a man who knew one skill but has mastered it,this is exact opposite of the mc,overall a very disappointing book,a cheap story created from smashing together some random ideas in a very 2d and lifeless book,i suggests you go and read books like lordofmysteries and reverend insanity to learn how write,
I've never enjoyed a fanfic so much as I have enjoyed this one, the way the history is handled, the implementaion of lore that we don't really see in the movies, the WoW thing caught me by surprise but it was a welcome one (See what I did there? ?) and the book overall is great, it makes me wish for a VR Game like it so bloody much, the release schedule is a bit weird and leaves much to be desired but I, as a writer understand it cus' I do the same, props to you author!
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bruh the guy is sooo dum i know he keeps prisoners but bruh the way he handles thing is not to my taste idk some people might like it. but its fustrating for me when you capture a rapist or a cannibalism and still locked them in instead of killing them j mean i could let some past but he locks most of them
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Most of the other low star reviews got it right. This novel is not worth reading.Why, because the author has no understanding of the human condition and he does not even try.Immagine spending a year doing the same thing all over again, then 10 years, then 100 years. This is about the maximum a human can life.There is only one thing someone who has left such a time loop would do and that is waste away. The human mind will break and disassociate with the body.Because the author does not address those issues we can only conclude that this is a novel by a bad author who only writes to finish his daily word count.Sanity is by definition hard to grasp but after 100 lifetimes in a void without consequences there is literally no way for a mind to grasp the concept any longer. Humans are not machines, therefore we learn from our environment.This is actually one of the rare few novels who could get away with a type of racism, because if you had experienced negative emotions every time you looked at an asshole who happens to be a foreigner for 10 years you would automatically associate every other foreigners of similar appearance with negative emotions. You would be conditioned to behave that way.But even this gets the novel wrong.
i don't plan to say anything in this review read it also and u most likely will like it so like this review and thank me after lol ?????