this is a good novel, hopefully it's not abandoned.
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Not a fan of mind control. I was hoping for something new, but it's generic and an overused concept. Dropped. Not for me.............??????
Haha..did not expect that. I only read your sypnosis but here is a 5 star. I will come back later and read it.. hehe. ^^for now.... (**) 140 characters coming up..I guess
The story has been pretty interesting so far. I think I would recommend it to others. I don't know what else to put so have a great day everyone
Amazing, once you get a hang of the writers style it’s easier to stomach , more of a relaxing adventure then a read , could definitely use some more spacing to break up the ideas, overall 7/10!
first of harem i am fan but i am not a fan of anthro anywaydo we still need beast taming novels isn't that seemingly more in this site why add this cause it doesn't look like its gonna give ua something fresh ?
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
TLDR, This stories like a writing project a 7th grader would turn in and get a C for.Interesting at first, cliche after cliche, to instant power-up and time skip, to adventuring with no clear purpose but a slight hero complex, no clear understanding of how strong the MC is. Apparently he's a "Sage" but we never really get a clear understanding of the world's power scale and how strong a "sage" is supposed to be, from what I can see so far he seems like a 2nd rate magician with a few single and multi-target spells, nothing that can kill over 10 people really. He kills completely evil people like slavers who killed his father and (maybe r*ped his mother? author was never clear) also killed his mother, or a fat old noble lady who threw one of her slaves to be r*ped by 3 men then killed, then shoved a fire poker up the bum of the other cat girl. But then feels bad and like he wasn't supposed to do that. He gets on the wrong side of a receptionist because of his naiveness who starts discriminating and bullying him even sending him to a brothel and a recommendation to one of those male-like female cliche characters. He then stays there despite paying more or less the same as a normal inn despite knowing where some normal inns are (place he stayed at when he first came in the city). Theres alot more stupid stuff like this to read in this book but ill end it here otherwise this review wouldnt be readable. It's not bad to have a few cliches and unlikeable characters, you just have to balance it out with your own original ideas and interesting plot points. For example, it doesn't make sense for the receptionist to be mad at the MC for so long, or the MC to just sit there and take her abuse without easily clearing things up, or to be staying in the brothel like hotel for so long when there are clearly other options for the same price. You could have at least gave a destination for the MC other than "wandering around relying on plot armor for lucky encounters". For example, finding some lost relic of the succubus race that his mother had, or seeking out his fathers sister in the capital to check up on her and write from there. These are some basic examples but a little can go a long way.
Welp..NGL the First 250 Chapters are great.. The Plot and story is going well untill this Esmeralda thing come into play... Sorry Author but I feel like the Arc Quality drops drastically when MC got abducted by this disgusting Vice president.. It's great but meh.. This really ruins my mood... Goodluck
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there are a lot of mistakes i suggest you use grammarly i use it when i wright essay i think it would help you. it works on mobile to .....