The story so far has a potential to be a good one, just a few improvements and regular updates and you have a fan.??
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heyya, all! It's my first time here trying out new hobbies and of course i shall give myself a 5 star review. Feel free to point out any mistakes I've made and new ideas which you might like to see or add. I'm all ears. here's my discord "melli1919" if you have any questions feel free to hit me up there
The creativity and execution of this book couldn’t get any better, I’m hooked. Starting to think the author is a genius.
loved hope it continues to doing well...
kind of a slow start but I like the concept and waiting for more
The pacing is perfect so far—engaging without feeling rushed—and the writing really brings out the characters' personalities. This book has all the classic office romance vibes but with an extra layer of intrigue that keeps you guessing
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I love your Story ✨It's not easy to write a book to be honest.Your plot twist is amazing and the fact that you took your time to get research and get an indept analysis on the lifestyle of Italians hereby incoperating it in your story.Your choice of words 100/10.A must read if you're interested in anything related to Italians, Modelling,etc✨
My first novel on this platform :d, it's good!
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I’m back with another shameless review! I have been reading my fair share of vampire novels and I started thinking of how I could make something different.. This is going to be my first novel I’m going to discipline myself to write, let me know what I can do to make the story better or ways to write ??❤️