Stepping stone.

An interesting novel with good potential. I wish the author does not give up the novel!                                                                           

Tbh was starting to like this novel until the romance happened, that **** ruined it for me. I mean he could’ve tried finding someone while in his adventures rather than be with a milf...

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Wow it has potential but it has no action i got to ch. 80 and drop it , if you could rewrite it and made the characters more interesting and add a smidgen of action it would be the best story.

I can't read it , it is so bad. You worship the MC of the original story too much , so your OC/SI is pretty much a wimp. You just keep praising Fang Yuan like you want to marry him or something . I get it that you like that character but what's the use of writing an SI/OC character if you are just planning on making him a wimp to worship your favourite character. Fang Yuan was a reincarnated 500 year old person but  he was still in school and weak at the start , while your SI/OC has complete future knowledge and is the grandson of a Rank 3 master , yet your SI/OC fears him like he is some God . "Looked at him at the awakening ceremony and got Scared" such a wimp SI/OC.

if i can give more star to world ? background i would the novel is great over all