Shameless brother of author here??.
Now on a serious note. To say the truth I love this book, many of you will say obviously you are his brother but to say the truth I never read his first book which he has deleted now
This is one of the books I follow I love the fact that the MC is not so OP but still stronger than most
Also I'm a big fan of system, well you guys and girls should at least try and read it
Peace and goodbye✌?
Nice start n different from the cliche one's. Don't drop it pls
love this story, always a highlight of my day when I see it's notification pop up. Author, I truly appreciate all your effort you put into your work.
its typical everyone hates China but then China beats everyone. It's the horrible mass produced Chinese ego stroking books that idk why keep getting made when from what I can see they never last long at all.
the story has a good start which was unexpected ...but who is the ml , does anyone knows
From my expierence on this website I have read many of good books. But honestly none of them even come close to the quality that is shown from this one. I cant help but feel refreshed when reading this book, not because I enjoy the main characters pain but because his pain is actually relatable. He doesnt only get physically hurt like most main characters but he also gets mentally hurt. His struggles are not only large monsters that want to smash him to a pulp but also his struggle to understand himself and what he feels during his journey. Never have I read such a good book on this website and I honestly doubt anything will come close for quite awhile. Bravo and keep up the great work Mr. Author.
it's an interesting storyline with lots of fun ways of passing a message. Can't wait for more chapters each chapters draws you in for more adventure Good Job David? this is brilliant ?.
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Have to support my guy Transcendent. Oh yeah, webnovel minimum text requirement. Anyways, here is a rocket ship:
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It’s an ok novel. Atleast better than most in this platform. Reviewed at ch 200Personal Score - 7/10MC - vagrant cultivator turned serious loyal soldier. His past life is only significant at the start and with regard to his combat/survival skills. He’s still OP though with edgy/cringe-y moments.Side Characters - generally bland and predictable but inoffensive. They’re not really vital to the story as almost everything is dependent on the intervention of the MC.Romance - it’s cute but it was too abrupt and became predictable. MC also suddenly had a goofy personality when it did happen which is kinda weird given the prior chapters leading to that. But he then switches to a cold and uptight personality at will.World Building - the world is grand, vast, and curiousity inducing. Mechas are a thing but not really a big part of combat as of yet which is weird because it was the focus at the start. It’sPlot - It’s ok. Nothing ground breaking. Imagine a Starcraft Terran novel but with cultivation levels. One criticism is that the plot is too MC-centric as mentioned earlier.Dropped at 200 because I’m really not a fan of the loyal and uptight soldier trope. Seems too propaganda-ish to me. Also the plot became uninteresting to me as it everthing became a “serve your country” plot. But it’s good though so give it a shot.
I honestly have no idea why so many people r tagging this novel with nationalism. This is honestly a great novel with a very good balance of overpowered chara and his struggles on different levels. The nationalism aspect was just a plot development where the author just used a group from some random country as bad people to show the character of the MC. The main villian who killed the MC is from his own country, many other evil and selfish characters are also from his country. So if the people really think that just cause the Author made the MC kill some people of another country that were bad guys as Nationalism then I think that's just judging books without even reading a good amount of it.
Enjoyed this when it started but later on, it started devolving into nationalist sturvs (although where I am in it isn't as bad yet) but what started turning me off was when martial arts started coming in. I felt like this was supposed to be a sci-fi or modern advancement novel and then martial art was brought somehow in-between and tried to make it look better than ordinary genetic modification. In one hand I was getting used to gene points and now I'm suddenly hearing dantian