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There is not much to complain about here, this is a good novel, the author's writing quality is really good, I like the story so far, yes the character design is great, as for the world background that is good so far, it's a new novel so there are a lot more to see, the story is quite interesting, good job author.
the novel is pretty good I recommend you guys read it
255 chapter reviewtldr: Good comedy but butcher by side character Su Changyu full of cringe and tasteless joke and poor execution of misunderstanding type of joke. Ever seen a good comedy book? Problem with being a comedy genre is that it takes skill to wring to cover hundred of chapter. The author do in fact have the skill by making the mc misunderstanding funnier, like Saitama. Problem is, author have the bad taste of putting side character in the same spot. The side character misunderstanding bring people to annoying phase, its not even funny and cringe. With copy and paste word of he just stand there, menancingly and all the daoist scare shitless. 1-2 chapter is ok, but when u even go to the extreme and have dozen of chapter dedicated to him, and still act the cringe way? That drop the quality for me. Also, the author keep repeating how he is more handsome than anyone, like i get it, u are handsome than mc, but stop saying that word every time u appear on the chapter. The side character also have the most fkin plot armor i ever seen, Even Yun Che have to salute him and call him as Father or senior brother. He is given fruit that can skip his cultivation by 500 year worth of training, and suddenly he become perfect with perfect cultivation when back then he stuck qi phase at late 20 age. The world background is average at best. The fruit alone is just a fkin plot device.
Almost slept reading this...not gonna lie but the genre itself is boring i love how everyone is making similar novels cause this genre got popular and most of them are direct copies ...Anyway i almost fell asleep reading this dropping in chapter 10
It seems it hasn’t been chosen but nevertheless this was a good experience from what I’ve read and I hope maybe it’ll get another chance. Of course that’s just a thought that probably will never happen though.
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