SpiritImmortalMvH
this is a good book it's very UNDERATED and the characters development is very good. It might need better update schedule. :DDDDDDDDD :DDDDDDDD
No originality, no characterization, no fun.Most of the chapters i have read (about 50 in MTL) are mostly based on everyone spending their time being in awe of the MC, that is, if they are not just commenting about its greatness and how surprising and mysterious he is. And all that while he is posing to the choir as the great controller of fate. Boring...The truth is that there is little more than this to the "story" chapters that i have read, so i feel that i should not expect more in the following.
This story seems like this will be somewhat of a spin on the hint novels that have started to pop up here and there around here on webnovel.
Reading Status: C31Writing Quality 5/5Stability of Updates 5/5Story Development 3/5Character Design 3/5World Background 4/5The total score: 4.0I recommend reading if you have time ?I will wait to read more to update the review to a more objective one, but everything is still young, turning points have not been reached and the character expansion arc will only begin with the academy. It has great potential.Personal comments: I liked the concept of the story, I will add it to my library. On the other hand, I would like to see the protagonist have more "prominence
First chapter is amazing, The protagonist is a God, Highly r.Ldkskw,wla!,ala,a,s,skalakjwmwkakakakwkw,laks,ska,ska
everything is a 5 star the story line the character the detail is really good it's like watching a good movie but more long like a series this books title carries its weight all the author needs to do is open more Chapters then il be super happy?
So far so good, the story is decent and the characters are well thought out. I am looking forward to more chaps. The only thing I think could be done better is phrasing and a few spelling errors could be fixed. And maybe the best part but no system is in it...yet let's hope it stays that way!
At first it was interesting, mc having the highest cultivation level in his plane/realm all to know that he have no combat experience at all which sucks.The plot is boring with alot of flaws.
l Like the story and character development. some things dont make sense but l can wait for more chapters ..................................
The story is awesome and I believe that the start is quite great. Keep on writing.. I will be waiting for new chapters... The imagery can be improved a bit tho...
I absolutely ADORE this book! Everything about it is just amazing. The world building is detailed and all the characters, even the background ones, are well fleshed out. Story-wise it is INCREDIBLE. I did not expect to come out of this having found one of the most well written, original stories I had ever read. The character development, the romance, the plot twists, it is all to die for. 10/10 highly recommend this book, keep up the good work author!
Only read the frist 20 chapters but so far it’s kinda the same as tale of demons and gods it’s so similar that I thought it was the original so im going to keep reading in hopes that it will differ later on if not ill drop it
