Hi! This is my third book, which is also the sequel for my previous book 'The Exiled Lady's Rumoured Tyrant.'. Please add it to your library collection if you are the readers or fans of my previous book. And please read my previous book and add both the book to your library collection if you are a new reader. Thanks.
i somewhat liked it till 70th chapter, as mcs power was kinda cucked and weakened by plot and explanations. mcs previous pets being 'frozen' and leaving him without anything was meh as well.
Great piece good lines Waiting already covered the addicting chapters and really it's great thanks for the write up don't stop oo can't wait to c what next. U av up to ur sleeves
I only really have one comment, and it’s vital that the person publishing this book on here reads it: Please, for the love of god, find someone to handle the grammar for you. Find a proper translator to handle this so it doesn’t look so blocky or cut off in areas.I read the last book you had on here, but after a while, the grammar started causing massive headaches. Your story has plenty of potential, you’re a great Storyteller. However, you NEED to find someone who can make it look more readable. You will scare away hundreds of potential readers who can’t handle this lack of care towards the language and the story. Otherwise, you’re doing great. Just make sure you work hard to find someone who has English as their first language to properly go through and fix the grammar. Using translation tools DOES NOT WORK.
When are we getting more chapters? It's been quite a while now and I'd love to keep reading this series. Here's to hoping you've been stacking chapters waiting to drop a ton for us...
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Missing a hundred chapters for the 1st and 2nd volume. Would read if added.Filler shshshshshshshshshshshshshshshshshshshshshshshshshshshsh
This book is actually a magical comedy book. The MC is basically Bob the builder. There is no world-building, secondary characters are steps to comedy. The author in fact knows nothing or very little about the civil construction process. It's basically a book to read in a medium-sized bank row, it's going to get some laughs and that's it.
so, are you telling me that he can give cancer to others?
The author should really kill himself for creating this piece of garbage.
Splendid writing skills. Quite immersive, I thought I was the one the creature was talking to. Also, how he stated the system status is marvelous! Keep it up!
Phenomenal start to what I except is going to be a wonderful addition to this site! The premise is intriguing and I can't wait for the new updates!!!