5-star early review. This book looks very promising.
if he is a senju then why is he living in an orphanage????
The only drawback is the fact that the translator is not being paid.It is simply great, I can't wait for the rest.__________________________________
Remarkable storytelling, supported by deep, well-developed characters, impressively thorough world-building, and a range of contrasting philosophical perspectives that open up intriguing future possibilities. Each character’s unique point of view adds layers of complexity, making the narrative truly stand out. But it has too primary characters making it almost like a series of separate short stories rather than a single, cohesive epic. While this approach broadens the scope, it may also mean that readers have to wait multiple chapters to return to a given storyline. The pacing is a bit on the slow side too. Maybe speed up the pacing and narrow down the primary characters or increase the frequency of the updates if possible.
Guys please support me it's my first novel I really need this just try to read and enjoy if you have any ideas you can tell me I am open to ideas thank you
the book has a good, i am looking forward to reading more.
its a good story quiet entertaining do continue with future chapters
Even though my rating is not very high I do enjoy this novel throughly. The reason behind my ratings will be explained following: World background- never actually established we can only guess as the reader it takes place in the real world with only four locations named two of which are schools and the final two being towns/cities, Updating Stability- actually falls under the category of being unable to be defined by a star rating due to being a new novel, Character Design- Currently few details are given about any character and character growth seems to be minimal currently (new novel), Story Development- There has been some degree of development however I feel there as also been a step backwards [in regards to the step backwards: Day two of the new school shows a side character having a showdown with the main character in the form of a question however it was established on day one that no other student besides the main character was able to answer the most difficult physics question on the previous test. This all comes together as a waste of time and needlessly added to fill space (if the author were to rework this as to having this class take part prior to the test answer review or state it as the other student was absent the issue would be solved. Overall it is not an actual major issue and easy to overlook)], Writing Quality-So far there have been no issues with name disassociation, or translation errors (as far as I am aware) meaning this novel is leagues above others.
"As you wish Master," said Jester while giving potion.
And so he did, but in the end, even though he came close, not a single clone made it through, and he had to stop, so that his reserves would replenish to an decent level before his fight, and by the time he had to head out, he had replenished about three fourths of his max reserves.
"Remember, I'll always be watching you." He whispered.
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