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Thomas, a football player after achieving his goals in life the spark inside of him had died down so he decided to retire from football and live rest of his life with his beautiful family.

One day, one morning he was out of home with his family on a morning walk and he was walking on morning walk when he sees a ball.

he ran toward the ball to kick the ball.
but he missed the ball and fall on the road near the ball, died near the ball. but he couldn't kick the ball.

"where am I? did I missed the ball?"

[welcome hero]

"who is this mother fucker?, where are you talking from"

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Can a person be too good at his craft? I'm starting to think Lumydee has it set out to bankrupt me (my poor coins)...Even after I told myself, I wasn't going to read it, the temptation was too strong, luckily it seems he is vacation this week (hopefully), it gives me time to save up, lol. This novel like all his other novels are addictive, so reader beware!!! Once you start thus novel, you will be hooked. Enough of the chit-chat, I need to get back to King of Technology, hopefully that can tide me over long enough for him to update the rest ?
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I'm only at Chapter 80 but here goes:Translation Quality: It's good and mistakes can rarely be found unless one nit picks continuously.Stability Of Updates: Hasn't been updated in a while but it was previously good.Story Developement: Ok I'm in no rush for the mc to become powerful quickly but 80 chapters in, he hasn't changed and while the focus isn't on him alot, I feel like he should have become more powerful than the average human already and he barely does anything, most of the work is done by Bei Li with it starting out as a gag but slowly becoming annoying.Character Design: The character design is really unbalanced, while some have interesting backrounds, others exist for the sake of existing and if they were side characters it would be okay but some areheavily focused on. The worst is the mc, I tried to like him but it's impossible as he is supposedly the descendent of the king of Beiqi but he does NOTHING and relies on Bei Li who is the only really good character.World Backround: The world backround is really interesting as I can't wait for the Underworld Seas to be explored but at the same time, slighlty more focus on the real world as it would be interesting to see the authors take o how humanity developed in 200 odd years.I don't review often but needed to say this.Thank You
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Great story background could use a little more detailing like what year they are in and what the continent/ world they are in is called, I haven’t seen any other problems with the story it’s great every other way just needs a little more background knowledge
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A BL novel that's actually tastefully written? Heck yeah. Even if you only came for fluff, you'll want to stay for the really good storytelling.
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Was it abandoned? Is there any news about this story?
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