Let me say that I've read up to chapter 148, and so far, I'm loving this story. The characters are well thought out, and each chapter makes you want more. I will definitely continue to read until the very end.
Its fine just a lil bit confusing I guess, also i really wanna know how the mc look! Maybe you could explain his appearance in the next chapter. Lol
Author-san, your book is amazing considering the fact that you are new to writing. some grammars are not so well written but doesn't affect the book. I like your main character and his interaction with his women... above all, he will make a good husband.
Not bad overall it's just that the MC comes off as a simp most of the time.
The book is very captivating..... The storyline, character development and everything in between....It's a good book.... Highly recommend it
The slime designs are amazing!"The various slimes are not only adorable but also possess unexpected abilities, adding fun and creativity to the story.
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I really think you should stick with this novel from the few chapters there are it's enraptured me and I just know the world that you've built up has so much potential. I know this because of your other book a wandering cowboy and I just believe if you stick with this one it will also have a lot of success. truly this book has so much potential.
i would recommend everyone to read it.after reading half of the book. i can say it’s good.
Writing- It is very good, cause the way you expressed it in a documentary style.as for the updates pls Im begging nex chapter pls... nah its good just keep your own pace pls make a discord. story is somewhat good. though you already used history and add something here and there, atleast you should put a bit of of diversity from our own timeline like the part where atleast bonifacio is not dead but atleast imprisoned, or the japanese or germans aiding us discreetly because they are business rivals with the americans.
it's good, But is feel like something i read before.. or maybe not.. anyway keep going.
Just the synopsis alone got me hooked up. Definitely gonna read this!