Not too bad.… at some points, got the yuri feeling ?
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This is honestly so awful like I have no idea what happened he went from recharging the game after buying himself exclusively beta testing equipment to everyone having one and they are having a massive fight. But I’m confused if the world has already merged because in the same chapter it talked about two months till the world merges but the next chapter is a full blown battle in the game no context. Maybe they missed uploading a chapter or something but I honestly don’t understand and do not recommend it. Just as a reference I’m a native English speaker and even Beowulf makes more sense than this.
As far as i can tell it is a good story. No major errors in Grammar or story, no real plotholes that are obvious. Not for me, but if you like the Tags give it a read.
I genuinely don't understand all the hype around this novel. I've only completely read through chapter 22 but I randomly unlocked and read further chapters to make sure I was only right about the early chapters. This book is a mess. Its background is completely unoriginal as is the world. The characters in the starting village are completely flat and lack reasonable personalities. In addition to the poor character writing the story is basically just a list in chronological order of what the mc does. The killer for me is that it is genuinely unreadable as the author makes mistakes every sentence and nothing flows correctly making the experience jarring and unpleasant.
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there is too much fake review, let me give you the real review it's a really boring novel, I tried to read it till 140 chapters, I even started to skip but it's too trash to read. by the way I read mtl of martial God space to 1800 chapter and that crappy google translation entertained me more than this novel. the MC is too fake, his speed talent and assasin path which where unique were lost as chapters progressed. he was gone for creating spaceship and speed racing, robot making in like first 150 chaptersI voted for this novel because of authors other novel, if you want to read a space adventure go and read galactic dark net it's a good one
This writer is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15. He's disgusting.
Is this novel ever going to be translated? It's a good novel.. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. .. . . . . . .
Let's say this first. In every Chinese novel there is face-slapping, in some more and others less, we clear? Yes, there happens to a lot of face slaps and most likely there will be a lot more.Ok, basically the mc touches beasts with his body parts and he will immediately know everything about the said beast/pet. The methods to evolution, curing illneses, potential upgrades ect.Now, there exist an occupation called beastmaster tamers whatever so you will know how the face-slaps gonna end.Ok, the mc is just overpowered in his said occupation not in actual strength. Many can kill him though the mc isn't weak either.Okay, now only if you read the later chapters (35 - 40) you would know there is LOTM vibes going on here. (Lord of the mysteries) the mc having his ability (museum) is gonna gather random people into a room where the guests can ask question about their pets to evolve, cure whatever in exchange samples of rare beasts (or other items in the future)Translation - 5* (smooth)SoU - 5* (trial read, always 5 stars)Story Development - 5* (Biased cuz I like the LOTM vibes and sort of copy)Character Design - 3* (There's emotion but not really a solid personality, average?)World Background - 2* (There's no info given, sure where the mc lives and some here and there but it's basically it's name and it's surroundings, no info at all. Maybe in future will it be explained but can't give a high rating. I know it's unfair because only 40 chapters but I am a honest man, have a nice day everyone)Total score: 4.0
Don't waste your time. The book is full of cliches. The story is based on WoW but a bastardized version. If you've read other MMO books then you've read this one. Ctrl C - Ctrl V but change the names a little and you have this book. It's not even trying to innovate. We also have the classic school reunion story where he got embarrassed in the past but this time he does face slapping.
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