Legendary Forces

The story in total is pretty good, ever since I picked it up I can't wait until it gets updated. The only thing is I would like longer chapters so more of the story could be developed, but since it's just the beginning I bet that it'll get better as the author keeps writing.

I really enjoy this book. its has an amazing story and great plot. also not to cliche( yet to be sure about that). I would have love to read more before dropping this review. thou have got an issue with the update, you can't expect to make a book premium at chapter( which mostly discourage new readers) and fix the update of chapters to once per day. that's really poor for a new book. even the top books like my vampire system update at least 3 chapters per day.  I think the author or translator to work more on releasing more chapters per day to be able to retain readers cause this book has a lot of potential. Hope my advise is taken seriously cause am getting bored with a single chapter per day and am about to delete it from my library if there is no changes.

First of all, I like the title! It kinda reminds me of the book "I am number four". It also has a unique story line that the author described in the beginning of the chapter. That goes to show how dedicated he is (the author) to let, readers, know the world! Great job(plus *coughs* the scratching of his balls WKKWKW) Overall I like how you explained the story and what they see. The only thing that I want to point out are the confusing words and sentences in the story. It didnt distrupted my journey, but it would be really nice if you could improve those few lines better!

i really appreciate this story plot,thank you for creating this novel has interesting characters it's the first time I've read a story about an NPC as main character like this one and I'm enjoying it.The MC is funny with his learning about his world,the way only one person knows the truth it's better as the MC is staying a mysterious NPC/PLAYER so it's great. I'm quite impatient for new updates and hope the future chapters will continue to impress me .

I love supportive parents. They literally give confidence and high self esteem to their kids. I especially love the father who is trying to make things right for his daughter.  Wow! She is one lucky girl. Its

Alright,Alright let's see where this end,I'm already getting fired up??