why did you stop, did the book not get contracted?
Best novel i have seen so farLove the writer so much ??
sarangayor ?????? weldone author ????????? keep it up??????????????
Hi ?! Author here. Third book, I hope everyone supports it. Unlike the previous two, this one's gonna be a banger, but it'll a bit of time to getbto the juicy parts.Stick around and find out!
I am the type of reader that only reads the first chapter or so then calls quits so my reviews may be a bit lazy but you got me to reach the second chapter just by mc's comedy so I approve. I know writing and stuff takes extensive planning and it can be a tiring chore really. For me I like stuff straight to the point so if I were to write a novel it would have story and world building but maybe missing bits of process of explanation in logic. All I see in first chapters is that authors do like 33 paragraphs but a lot of them are just written in 2 lines with good spacing. I am digressing... Anyway you could make it big as an author you are able to overcome your hurdle of consistency!
Wow my dear author this time you went your way out with this one It got me into the world of imagination the moment i read the first chapter.It's really the best Park book i ever read and i strongly recommend it
Keep it coming, if possible make more R18 chapters but beside that rest is amazing. you are doing great work that everyone else can't do. proud of you.
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I'm the AUTHOR Here!!Thank you all for the reviews...... Others, Please say something nice, It MOTIVATES me..All reviews will be greatly appreatiated....
Speed down the pace of your story a bit, and add more conversational depth between the characters. Otherwise pretty good plot and have a potential to shine. Keep up the good work!
This is the first sport novel I've read but I don't regret it one bit it is actually a very interesting read, it's way better than I thought it'd be.And I hope Mia is a baddie ???go team LIO ??
The Story actually started off oretty good and kept me interested for most of the way through to the current chapter.(which at time if review is about 280 or ao chapters) But the story really starts to go downhill around chapter 200 as there forced events and character decisions that make no sense. New characters that are just annoying and dont make sense for who they are suppose to be. The MC who I had originally liked, i started to get annoyed with and started making choices that went against who he is. Its really dissapointing cause i had hope for this as there aren’t many decent Dungeon Lord type novels. There are other problems in this book, but for me the major turnoff where i just could not continue happened around the 200’s and i think specifically around 220.