Fei Xue

wow! As I read every chapter it makes the characters alive because they have their POV. The way the author writes is descriptive that helps me imagine the scenes well. I am looking forward for more! ?

I really enjoyed the story, since he's gaining followers he should give them the white karma and adopt them into his clan.So yeah so far so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????

Writing quality: third grade. The author doesn't know anything at all about English, and it shows. They constantly misuse punctuation marks, have no clue of the difference between your and you're, the language used is basic, and it's littered with typos and grammar errors. 2/5Update stability: no clue, but giving it a 1/5 because this abomination deserves a low overall rating.Story development: missing. As of chapter 89, nothing of any note has happened except for the absolute worst examples of tropes. I rate this a 1/5 and would rate it lower if it was possible. My actual rating in this category would easily be a zero.Character design: the worst. I haven't seen dumber characters on this entire platform, and considering I've seen literally hundreds of novels on the Webnovel platform, that's truly saying something. The main character's brain could be used to forge Mjolnir, the best friend is the most annoying combination of best friend tropes, the ex-wife is irredeemably stupid, and... well, everyone is the dumbest version of their particular collections of cliches that it's possible to be. 1/5 and I would recommend to this author in particular that they keep their day job, because being an author is just something they shouldn't do.World background: abysmal. The bog standard modern-day face slapping novel, but the absolute worst version of that in every category. 1/5Overall: I had low expectations but was somehow still disappointed. This showed up in my WN weekly recommendations for some unknown reason (someone probably sold their soul to the devil), and I started reading it solely because the chapters weren't locked. I regret it and wish I could light the brain cells containing the memory of this failed abortion on fire and burn them to complete and utter nonexistence. I regret very little about my life so far, but reading 89 chapters of this garbage excuse for a novel is one of those rare regrets. Author, I hope that you have to answer every seventh question you're asked with the phrase "in my butt" for the next four and a half years.

here are the cultivation levels for the people interested:1.Body Tempering Realm, 2.Qi Storage Realm, 3.and Pulse Realm.4.Origin Liquid realm, 5.Spirit Sea Realm, and 6.Primordial Spirit Realm.7.Refined Realm, 8.Rebirth Realm, and 9.Tribulation Realm.10.the Saint Prying realm, 11.the Entry Saint realm, 12.and the Breaking Realm

Interesting read, author. Very interesting read. The characters are nicely written and bring the book to life.The plot is even written nicely so that you are waiting and wanting for another chapter.Good job and keep up the good work.

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