Everything was ok at the beginning until the latest chapters. Translation is bad and looks more mtl than before ...........................................
??????????????????????????????????????????????What a good story, too good. I wait for more.I really get excited about owning a team, and taking it to the top. You should improve the entire football proposal, invest in a better academy than Manchester or Liverpool. Also, have physical trainers.
I didn't read the story (not my style) but I respect the author's passion and perseverance.❤(Thanks to Google Translate)
Story just contradicts itself every other paragraph,one chapter his control has increased . next chapter his control has fallenone chapter his Qi is pure . next chapter it's muddy .one chapter he wants to do X . next chapter doing X is just out of the question .one chapter he gets an inheritance . next chapter it's too bothersome to actually read it .
I've been voting for this every day with my energy stones and now they took it off the voting pool? What's the point of trial reads and picking novels then putting it in voting pool if this happens? This has been in voting pool for 9 months, people are still voting for it and it got taken off like this. I know novels get abandoned in this site, but this novel which was supposed to get translated didn't even start.
The story is great and all but it lacks proper world building. The MC is supposed be intelligent according to the author but MC acts like emotionaly unstable idiot. The flow of the story is a bit lacking and the MC some how kills s level creatures even though he himself is low leveled and what heck is it about an s level taxi driver! And the constant exited yelling of the MC gets on your nerve while reading. The overall Idea and concept of the story is great but presentation is lacking
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yet another wonderful novel dropped by webnovel great story great plot great fucking everything it was also very funny but they just drop the fucking novel these pieces of shit just drop the novel and I'm pretty sure they have the license so no one else will be able to translate it which is why i sincerely recommend you piriate your novels from ********** not the real one the one with the app with a blank space and a dragon on it them they have most of the webnovel books on there for free also **** webnovel never have i felt such hatred for a company just completely moraly bankrupt and evil
This is is very generic, the guy is someone who is in a unfortunate situation and magically gets a system or has a secret background. You can expect everything to be the same, but atleast the auhor has put some hardwork into it.
5/5 ლ(●ↀωↀ●)ლRecommended! ╰( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )つ──☆I love the concept of this story! (ΦωΦ)I like how interesting the characters are! (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:・ﾟ✧I am excited to know what more thrilling events will take place! ٩(ↀДↀ)۶
The plot is unique. The new ideas and concepts are refreshing to read ? the protagonist is sometimes a bit clumsy and funny, looking forward to his upcoming journey ?