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I believe its a wonderful read and the author has a lot of unleashed potential...well done, Warlock. The author here is careful to not make the MC too comfortable. Pretty heartless I'll say though thats what makes it the more unique.. This novel has a lot of potential and i really wish the author would post more chapters . Good luck, though.I know you won't need luck with your talent. You've got what it takes
Please continue this novel I really have enjoyed the 314 chapters so far!
please update more chapters wanna read more chapters
This is a really nice story, I'm not a fan of first person POV but the author did a great job in writing. The synopsis is really nice and the story is something worth reading
Warning: This book may cause a severe book hangover. Side effects include daydreaming about the characters. ??
After hearing that the novel is late in entry in wpc 228 and seeing that it still won 2nd place that must be a proof of your good work author san. I'm only a few chapters in but keep up the good work mr noworryman.
chapter 25 ends with him wanting to follow the prisoner he helps to find out more of the truth, but chapter 26 suddenly change into him joining a variety show to show off his escape skill. And no, there are no skipped chapter, the author just suddenly went from serious arc to bragging arc for no reason.
Chapter order is messed upOr the author has no idea on how to make a bookOne chapter the MC goes to some genius who's had his talent sealed to take him away, the next chapter the genius is taking the sect disciple admission test, the next chapter genius acknowledges MC as his master, the next chapter genius begs MC to make him his disciple.Either translator problem with chapter sequences or bad writing.MC has a sign in system with a disciple systemEvery special disciple he gets will give him a reward.MC reborn in a wuxia world as a direct disciple of a peak in a sect.Nothing else so far.
Story seems promising I guess, but there are so many mistakes with the writing it’s literally unreadable. I find it impossible to immerse myself in the story when I’m constantly trying to piece together sentences
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Hands down one of the best World Building I've ever seen. The plot is amazing, and you are making me want to improve overall as a writer. Hope you continue because I added this to my library so I am looking forward to it!
The xenophobia is strong in this one! it's still a pretty good read though..................................................................
