Okay so let me just say—Manager Fang is the WORST kind of antagonist. You know the type? The petty bureaucrat who thinks he can bully his way to the top. He literally steals Jiang Luokui's lettuce, puts it in the trash, then tries to blame her for it mutating. And her response? Chef-level calm. She doesn't even raise her voice. She just points out the SAND on the leaves and drops the whole thing like a mic. The soil in the experimental field is black loam—sticky. Her lettuce would NEVER have sand on it. Boom. Exposed. But here's what really got me—the Boss Zhao subplot. He's selling vegetables at a suspiciously low price, claiming they're from a new variety. Jiang Luokui tastes them and immediately notices something's off: no radiation flavor, but also no soul. It's like the vegetables are hollow. Meanwhile, her own produce tastes better the SECOND time she harvests it. The author is setting up a whole conspiracy here and I am HERE for it. And then the scallion oil post on the forum—wait, what?! Her scallion oil is apparently god-tier and a combat student is losing their mind over it. The OP says even a high-grade protective suit's filtration system couldn't block the aroma. That's not just cooking, that's basically a superpower at this point. The plot is weaving together so many threads and I can't stop turning pages.
Okay so I need to talk about Shen Hehua because this girl is absolutely unhinged in the best possible way. Like, her third brother Shen Jiandang is out there casually strolling toward the river, totally clueless, and she just *sprints* into the water like she's been waiting her whole life for this moment. And then—get this—she starts ELBOWING the fake-drowning woman in the back of the head while smiling and calling her "Comrade!" in the sweetest voice. Three elbow strikes. Then three slaps. Then she's rinsing the woman's face in the river like she's washing dishes. My brother would not have survived childhood if I had this much restraint issues. But what really got me is the sibling dynamic. Shen Jiandang just *knows*. He sees his sister in the water and instead of panicking, he just... understands. The text says he somehow understood exactly why she jumped in, even though he couldn't see her face. That's the kind of sibling bond that doesn't need words. And then when he realizes what she's actually doing—taking the fall, protecting him, taking out years of pent-up rage on this woman who tried to destroy their family in the previous life—he doesn't lecture her. He just says "Little sister! The water's cold! Hurry and come ashore!" Like, bro, I know you're assaulting her but also stay safe okay? The way Hehua and Jiandang operate as a team is chef's kiss. One glance between them and they're coordinating like special forces. She spots the grass, signals him, and he immediately figures out there's a male educated youth hiding there. Subdues the guy in a couple of moves. These two have been getting into trouble together since childhood and it shows. Also, the fact that Jiandang is described as "foolish" but is actually the most perceptive person in this scene? Classic misdirection. He looks lazy and leisurely but he's sharp as a tack.
Okay this is my review!World Building: I think this is an aspect that was his strength and pretty much well planned. By far it was okay and was well established.Pacing: It was slow but fine. Well tuned up and Narration was fun and funny sometimes.Writing quality: Grammar is fine but there are typos here and there. Needed to be rechecked as it destroys the flow. Also synopsis needs to be reworked. Strengths: Story, Plot, World building, NarrationWeakness: Grammar, typos, Synopsis
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Only 9 chapters but I think for a new book it's a good start. The synopsis is really good and I love the revenge plot of this story. More chapters and kudos! ???
this story has amazing potential. Unfortunately, I couldn't even reach chapter 10 due to how jarring it is to read. There are so many grammatical issues; it's honestly surprising how many people have stuck around to read. if anything, though, it proves how much potential this novel has. I encourage the author to take the time and edit his chapters more carefully. good luck. I'll check in on this book in a month or two. If the Grammer improves, so will my review.
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Story is slow paced. One chapter daily is not acceptable. Even chapter is not that long. I love the storyline. Requesting the author to publish more or longer chapters. Thank you.
when i read the first chapter i almost thought this was a story about the demon world looking upon us - about Covid and man made lab leaked viruses. only a few chapters are released maybe the plot will become clear by then. good luck on the novel
The story follows the main character, a vanilla hero with the ability to bring back dead humans. With the help of a crab that can purify the humans that had been turned to monsters due to the apocalypse, and a goal of 1million humans brought back alive, he embarks on a journey of survival, kingdom building, and war to preserve the hope of humanity and being them back from the brink of extinction. A great novel so far and I am hoping to see many more chapters soon! Keep up the great work!
This novel is a promising gem with great character development and an engaging storyline. The emotions the characters convey are beautifully written, making each scene deeply impactful. The world-building is solid, and the pacing of the updates keeps the readers hooked.While still early, the story has immense potential to grow into a masterpiece. Fans of the "extra" trope will find something refreshing here, and the steady improvement in quality with each chapter makes it a rewarding read, since the author listens to his readers. Definitely worth following for anyone who enjoys a blend of action, mystery, and heartfelt moments!