Unfortunately Misfortuned

read 41 chapters at a time (the chapters are not large) interesting, even though the hero is dumb for his age............................................

I love the beginning of this novel; how the writer immediately pulls us into the story's world. The narration and descriptions are great and the character development is simply amazing.

Fantastic story so far. Is the story dropped or on break??????????

Yet another brain dead author tries their hand at writing for sweet China Points.Will there ever be a good trial read? Will Chinese authors ever stop being racist? Tune in next time to find out on 'Never Gonna Happen'!

Feels like the writer was going through something while writing this. Most plot points don’t make sense and there is a lack of explanation. The poor grammar and mixing up of names does not help either. I’ve decided to drop at chapter 14 after checking the reviews on the story (wish I had done that earlier). Final thoughts: The story is quite intriguing so far but the grammar and number of mistakes is just way too unbearable. Don’t recommend to others

Amazing Novel. There is so much potential in this and I just really hope that you do not drop this novel because these type of novels often do get dropped in the early stages. Honestly though, if you change the book cover to something more mainstream and do around 3 of your current length chapters per week, then you will definitely get more readers and recognition because your writing quality and storyline is top notch. ?