yes guys I too think he can use a bit morre exposer I think this novel has the chance tk grow with the help of right people and right place
I tried but I couldn't go over the 11th chapter, it has the feeling of either a voice writer someone whose first language is not English, someone trying to write too many words everyday, or some mix of the previous.There's multiple Grammar errors in every chapter, the writing style is seems geared towards teens, with a very strange flow most of the time. it may be MTL.iIhave given three stars to story development because I haven't read enough to evaluate that dimension, but the characters design reminds me of those old Asian movies that every character is some kind of extreme, very obvious and clean cut archetype.It's not like the novel is sooo bad, I've found worse here, but i find it lackluster and not worth my time
"A Masterpiece of Fantasy and Emotion"The Fallen Star Angel: A Celestial Redemption is a breathtaking journey through love, loss, and the eternal struggle for redemption. Carla Vilar has woven a tale that is as emotionally resonant as it is fantastically vivid.From the first chapter, readers are drawn into a celestial realm rich with intrigue and beauty, only to be thrust into a mortal world brimming with emotional complexity and danger. The protagonist’s journey is heart-wrenching yet inspiring, and the love triangle with the rival fallen angel adds a layer of depth that keeps you turning the pages.What sets this book apart is its ability to seamlessly blend celestial fantasy with deeply human themes. The rich world-building, combined with moments of action, betrayal, and tender romance, makes it a must-read for fans of fantasy fiction.The climactic battle and the protagonist’s ultimate sacrifice left me in awe. This is a story of hope, redemption, and the transformative power of love that will linger in your heart long after the final page.Carla Vilar has created a masterpiece that deserves a place among the best fantasy novels of the year. If you’re looking for a story that will captivate your imagination and touch your soul, The Fallen Star Angel is the book for you.
until chapter 19 , its a good ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
This novel is one of the best in beast taming novels, I advise you to read it ??
Your story is very good. If you post more chapters of the novel in a day then it will be more fun.
I will give myself 5 stars, because I think my novel has that potential.
Hi Author! I like the concept of your story, about academy and the MC's power. I think it will be like magic academy anime story, or like mashel. Keep up the good work!
Why are almost all the fun characters in novels betrayals? Markus, shame on you! Can't say much about the book since it has less than 15 chapters. Will come back to write a full review. But so far, I'm loving what I'm reading.
a good story with an interesting story concept.
I like the way the dialogs are specified and how they conveyed it was amazing good its just the change in language confuses me but everything else was nice the world background need a lil more detailing over all it was a nice concept
want fp bladibladibla....................