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Its better than most novels on here but I would not call it a masterpiece. The writing is ok but nothing where I just want to keep reading. Its not immersive at all. I had to drop the novel at around Chapter 20 because reading the novel is just not engaging in my opinion.Kind of feeling bad to give this a negative review because you can see that the author put a lot of effort into his creation. But I just got bored. Its just not mine sorry.

wow, I'm so late found this gem but gladly found this story too. 1st of all, thank you so much to share this novel/story/your idea to us. its really interesting story and recommended to other readers, totally hooked up.  thank you so much for your hard work too. thanks also for frequently update despite real life is more important too.  don't forget to take good care of your health too. keep it up and good luck to you dear author. hope reader will share/recommended this story to others.

Has the potential to be great keep it up and don’t drop this novelRueurhfhdbdfbdbdjdjddbdbdbdbfhddjfjdjfhffhfhfhfhfbfhfdhfhfhf

I will give 5 for the writing quality and no shit in this novel like beta MC and other stuff.The story has a great start, good plot and interesting characters. I like kingdom building and cultivation novels, the story has good Phase. keep it up author ?

its a great story so far. i recommend it. better then the trashy novels out there. just wish there was more to his system. maybe a bit more uniqueness?

Hello again... Finally found the time to edit the previous chapters. I've corrected most of the syntax and grammatical errors found so far, might take time to reflect. I'm halfway through the chapters. Will update you when I'm done.Cheers!!