was wandering if I can find a Husband here too
Man this story is the hella fun to read it especially since this is a alternate Philippines now that's a plsusin my eyes lol check it out and read it lol
Loved the story and the character design.Especially the start of the story, starting with a cliffhanger like that was a really good move.Really looking forward for the upcoming chapters!!Amazing work, Author!!
nice work i like the story it feels like Koren hunter novel's Indian version so its nice and good at least better then mine, and if you have time read frequency(Fq) buddy
While the prologue is a little slow, Chapter 1 jumps into action quickly. I'd like to see a little more of the boy before he recovers. I think the contrast between the inflicted boy and the astute man would make for terrific character development. However, the ML comes across as strong and wise, someone I'd be willing to follow. I particularly appreciated how much the father cared for the boy and the efforts he took to protect him. Keep writing. This story has a lot of room for development and surprising twists and turns.
"That is me but I don't plan on killing you. You have a more important role…" Issei said flatly
'But she also like me was a family of three.'
My world's on fire, how about yours?
Only shooting stars break the mold
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Riser:"sudah lama sekali saat Riser Phenex ini kedunia manusia yang kotor ini"
I said yep what a concept