A very good book in my opinion. The plot develops naturally and I love it. I'm looking for more. I hope the author updates more often cause this is lit
Story is good but what I keep thinking is who will be the ML? Wade is annoying but very brave.Michael is too hot but mysterious.I thought Ben will be the villain but maybe not. He's hot but mean. Alex is handsome too but he always smokes weeds. Or there will more FL?
looking good so far only thing that can kill this novel whould be changing the mc mindset ?............................................ ?
Hello guys I am the author of this book. If you are tired of seeing bullied, dark past, sister relationship, family problems and the same cliché stories. Then this novel is for you all.
Honestly, I have loved it so far. Keep up the good work author!
A well written and an interesting piece of work. It is an exciting blend of opness and storytelling. Highly recommended as it is actually is one in its own league. Incredible work.
I can recommend it for everyone that is looking for a nice cultivation novel!So far (ch46) the story is quite interesting and the mc is manipulating the events to his benefits. I can see that the author makes him act smart, and he won't go crazy and take advantage of every single situation, just the tactical more important ones. There is, in a way, a second mc in this story. He is the actual mc, and also the competitor of OUR mc. Some 10000-year-old grandpa who is reincarnated, and now he is kissing little ****y girls. No, seriously. That dude is extremely strong with his experience and so on. Yet, our mc has knowledge as well and manages to fool that guy pretty good so far.The story is still fresh, but I can see that it is developing nicely. There is also a system, which is a bit op but not broken etc. It required the mc to be active and work hard to work properly. It has some quite interesting features, too. Anyway, grammar etc. is good enough. Waaaaaay better than the translations from the Chinese works.All in all, READ IT!... and enjoy your day.
The story is quite captivating, and it got off to a good start in capturing the attention of the readers. I've read several chapters, and so far, I think the plot is good, and I'm excited to see what happens next. The storyline is well-structured, and it never failed to pique my curiosity about what would happen next.
Good grammar which I really enjoy. I like the personality of all the characters and the different outlook on cultivation because I read lots of different cultivation kind of books and they’re usually very similar which makes it less enjoyable.
I feel like there are gaps missing between each chapter I'm missing out on. I don't like how the story changes perspective from MC to another mid-chapter too often. I think there is a need for a more descriptive background for the main characters and side characters. Overall good story.
I don't know what to say ? great wars . . . .
I have never seen anything like this the humor is great and very prevalent and yet still allows for character progression. The characters don’t seem like characters either they seem like some of my closest friends I can find myself going back and reading old chapters just because I can’t get enough by far the best in my opinion