Gotta say in my eyes overall you've done a pretty damn good story. I have enjoyed everything that I've read so far and I am hoping to see even more from this writing style!. Everything seems solid and I hope many many others choose to give this story a chance because it deserves success!.
I’m still very much enjoying this story and I’m looking forward to more~
"Alright now this show will continue with my drama show, which tell me about my little life entitled 'The Little Rioy adventure Not Fake stories I Promise. I'm not lied, my mother is the prove'."
"Rules number two is, you and me be able to talk to your creation, to tell them something usefull for your creation, but you not allowed to help your creation by your power."
" that is a little girl" another servant girl chimed in causing the servant girls to bicker about whether dewdrop is a girl or boy.
I hope you enjoy your second life mortal .
After a short moment of silence, Ezio continued.
Agility:t 20
Lawrence then enter the door which leads to a battleground where where the ceilings was 35 meters high and a battleground that was big as a basketball court, and in the sides was spectator seats that can host 150 spectators, this was also one way where gym earns money by selling tickets to watch a battle, this may not be the best way to hide confidentiality of a challenger but this can also way to attract job and boost your fame at the same time many recruiters of team or organization may also offer you a job, so there were pros and cons but mostly pros cause normally if your not confident in your strength or don't have powerful backer you won't dare to challenge a gym
"Damn ..." Ben spoke a little when complaining about how difficult it was to bring a Pokeberry Oran to his mouth, when he finished eating it, the strength returned to his body.
For a moment... Just a moment
He turned around, holding his stomach and saw another wolf still alive, it was the leader and just like him, he didn't want to be bothered while eating but now he had done eating. He was growling and howling to the sky, it wasn't normal howl, but a series of pitched sound that came each from the mouths, there was pressure in his body and illusion that the world had become bloody night.