Man what the hell are you writing even 3 year old kid wrote better than that and what the hell with these people liking the work it's one of worst work ive ever seen
The plot is irritating, and the mc never seems to learn his lesson, he keeps doing the same thing that got him in trouble over and over again.
This is definitely one of my new favorite.
WOW, this novel is too perfect. The writing quality is excellent, and the plot seems to be well arranged it's almost too good to be true, but here it is, it's not every day you would find a perfect villain novel with reasons and to think I'm just at the 4th chapter hohoho how exciting ? ? ? really I'm loving this already i would've loved to explain more of my reasons for liking this but I'm not a fan of writing too much haha
Hope you all enjoy this story, cause I am, it's something I recommend you should read ????
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I like it. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Very intresting story, i was a little skeptical about the darker aspect but i believe this story got potential i am very excited of the contents of the future chapters great story so far
Good writing, good pacing and amazing characters.
This is too stupid!!! Mc has 2 systems and one of them is given by gods called Heavenly system(HS)...and guess what, its's down right terrible!!! Mc is forced to become a villain and if he treats any one positively, even his family in the starting(even though only once), he gets tortured by HS...his memory is sealed by HS and has no free will...he is a literal dog on a leash and if he tries to create a positive image, you know what happens...the bastard author's so called created gods force frame mc to be evil in front of everyone and still sacrifice himself for them in the end...Why not make him a puppet???He is literally a pseudo puppet already...Gods don't force someone to be evil you brain dead author, if thats the case then humans would not have inherent cruelty in them, all you have to do is fan the flames and watch the world burn, hell just give them a little power with no backlash and thats it for fucks sake...you want mc to gain our sympathy but you should better find friends dude, you are wasting your life there by leeching off sympathy from newbie readers.
the novel is amazing, I highly recommend it for readers.
getting tired of this novel ...sorry author but this is stupid all his reasoning not destroying the high tower over and over again is stupid his life ,the lives of his love one's keep being in danger over and over again and he keep a passive approach towards it while he keeps dealing with bugs and cockroaches over and over again when the biggest cause of it all he just leaves them be im done over 500 chapters all he has to do is take control or deal/destroy the high tower and his problems will be lessens and he could focus on his tech but NO many sentimental reasons from his woman and he won't do it even when his woman die they somehow revive .magical realism my ass . this novel is like face slapping Chinese novel out there with magical BS that you won't understand you just have to ride along with such BS and logic especially MC's logic why he wont just take care of the biggest tumor the hightower where he can likely find most of his answer . sign here's the scenario for this novel if anyone wants to read . MC died and resurrected by someone or unknown idkMC finds out His former GF is alive/ resurrected MC went for Revenge on his killerMC build a techno cityMC gains knowledge that's behind all of those shts that happened to him and his GF is the hightowerMC almost lost his GF again because of high tower GF almost die because of satanMC went to revenge againMC gave his GF to japan to get treatedMC find out that his GF is being a damsel againMC almost lost his GF again and surprised its the high tower behind it all againand suprise his decision leave them be for nowMC went to war again in america with bugs and cockroaches and suprise behind it all is hightower againand your reader here is DONE wasted my time here sorry for a demoralizing comment i don't usually do this but its frustrating reading you MC and his logic you mask it a magical realism and him being overly cautious when in reality he can deal with them with ease given his technology and magic and cheat almost like a system