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Keep it up bro, I'm waiting to see more...
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This is a great story with good worldbuilding and character design.
the idea isn't bad it's just lacks proper execution , the first mistake u made is not giving the main character a proper backstory at the beginning of the story , a backstory allows us to know why the mc is so resourceful in the wild ,how was he able to sneak up on the boar without being noticed , it lets us know what kind of character the mc has and it lets us know why the mc has good looking physique without a proper backstory it makes everything the mc does feel like it's coming out of know where , also your main character is coming to conclusions to fast without proper explanation or thinking , I Can except if he guessed he was transmigrated , but the mc shouldn't have figured out he has soul magic by just using it once and progression with the power is a litt little bit to fast , also the mc is in wilderness , creating a harem of beast girls should be the last thing on his mind , it makes him look like somebody who doesn't have common sense and him thinking of turning an animal into beast girl is weird and out pocket, if u wanted to add that sheep girl , u could have just had the MC turn the sheep into waifu by mistake or accident , that way u could have added the sheep girl and it wouldnt make the main character come across as an idiot and its less weird as for the rest , there are too many chapters for how little the story progressed , these 10 chapters can easily be compressed to 4 chapters . That's all i have too say , u have potential u are just not using it properly let me give u advice , anytime u write a chapter , read it before hand and ask yourself is there anywhere i can improve and making it better or more exciting
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
I like it. But needs more chapters. Come on bro you need to update more. Update faster. Can't find anything else to read. This is the best NTR.
Heard it's a pogo book, and got more poggers than I thought! Good content, good author, no need for more! Read now guys
Actually ran to give a review after reading up to chapter 4. it's making a lot of sense. kudos to the author
Ok let me start off by saying tat this novel isn't bad but it's not that good either. The starting is quite good when the mc starts to lvl up and saying that she wants to get as strong as possible until it got to the kingdom building genre the mc stops leveling up at that point the novel got boring and I basically skipped some paragraphs. I think this novel will get better in the future (hopefully). That's all fokes
Have read few these contract marriage, CEO, romance stories but this is well written. The plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. Love the setting and composure of the writer. I highly recommend it.
As a new author who doesn't really know a lot about how to write good stuff, I request you guys to give me 'Constructive' criticism. Whether it's a mistake in my grammar, sentence formation, etc.Also, I'm not doing this just to add another 5-star review to my novel.Definitely Not