Good characterisation, good story development and conversation between character to character is good . finally sex scenes are interesting to.
A really enjoyable story with lot of interesting set ups for future I hope it gets translated. The game it self is very interesting the main character is good. I like the WoW inspired world and the influence of players over it
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This story has good world-building and amazing plot! I would totally recommend it to anyone who likes fiction and cultivation! Thank you author for such an astounding story!
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I mean I’ve seen a few modern cultivation stories with apps being the main source of their advancement but this is certainly the first time I’ve seen one using the power of SIMP. That’s something you may love or hate depending on your personality. Personally I find it an interesting plot device so I have no problems with it. Grammar was OK, it wasn’t amazing but didn’t take much from the story. All in all I look forward to the rest of the story.
This is amazing!!! I've read some of Kings avatar and watched parts of the anime, but this story blows all my previous concepts out of the water. This story is so good, I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work. ??