Did the author do a hiatus or just drop the novel entirely please tell me
I really want to say fiki mich fckin hell why the hell Zhu Yao always keep that XIAO YI alive even when there are great chances to make him dead like sect master punishment of heretic practitioner sex relationship with Ru Yui. She should end it for once and all such trouble save that bastrd bear his hatred and then die so frustrating to me as a reader.
I am utterly captivated by your book! It's a literary gem that warrants far more attention than it's currently receiving. The characters are intricately crafted, the plot is expertly woven, and the writing is nothing short of exceptional. It's a travesty that more readers haven't had the pleasure of immersing themselves in your work yet. I'm eager to help you devise a strategy to increase its visibility and garner the accolades it so rightly deserves. Let's collaborate to devise a plan that showcases your masterpiece to the world!"
Hey All. Author here. If you have any constructive Criticism about the story so far. I would love to hear it. I still wish to improve a lot on writing .
also any question feel free to sound off. I'll try to answer those as best as I can in this very earlier stage of the story thus far.
Welp. back to writing I go!
I uh, made the mistake of reading it in the middle of the night while camping... weekend trip turned into one night. Fantastic writing! need therapy now...
Hero Who Has A Heart Of A Rebel And Heroine Life Is Like A Flower.Let Us See What Can You Both Do.
thanks good novel. 2 free chapters please
this is one of the dumbest novels i've read in a while. chapter 10 the college examination starts. 1.part: talent test, mc blows up the talent testing device because his talent is off the charts.2. part: kill at least 10 mummies or get disqualified, how does that make sense? our mc got a weak trash pet at the start bc he is an orphan with no funding(ignoring the system). his original pet is not strong enough to even kill one of them, so he would fail this exam because he wasn't born in a rich family or was lucky enough to pick a powerfull beast egg in school? completely disregarding his talent and potential? which post apocalyptic society on the brink, barely holding on, would squander that talent. because he wasn't lucky enough to pick a powerfull beast? he would be nurtured and given all the resources he would need to grow, in exchange for maybe 5-10 or more years of mandatory military service.
it's an amazing work of art.?the only slight off-putter is the minor grammatical errors, if not, it'd be perfect.
Classic, writing a story to make a quick buck and never finishing it.
I love that the MC wants natural growth and self hard work. The world was vast & mysterious. There's so much going on and had various factors for the plot but its not jumbled and the story flow so well. I cant stop reading.
I love it this novel is amazing at the beginning mc is a really evil naughty boy, but with the development, he become enlightened and his personality changes lotMC is not an unidirectional character and that's greatthe novel also has a lot of teachings about Taoism and Buddhism and live in generalos great you should read it