Mercury18
So to start out this is an amazing novel I am all the up to the most recent chapter 237 and although the beginning is slow it opens up a whole new world once his second year at school starts and is a great novel to stick with as you will be blown away by the potential this story has! I love the characters they are very well done the interactions get better wnd better throughout the novel and leave me very satisfied! I will add more at a later date i am not the best at making reviews.
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u know I have always wondered why is that India has so many great literaturrs but we don't get to see any fantasy novel related to those. it's a very nice and new idea , I support you wholeheartedly, keep up the good work, thanks for this story
heyo crazy cronie here,review on 01/09/2021 @chap 211(released chap till date: 219)review divided in: Short reviewLong review with ratingsCC rants.ConclusionSHORT REVIEW: A slow paced SOLish where mc accepts disciples with some action & comedy.LONG REVIEW: writing: 9/10 Lil typo mistakes but not to the point where it hinders your reading experience... at least I didn't have any prob. update: 10+2/10 Yeah, deserves more than the max rating... For me 7 ch/week is must for full rating for any original novels and this one releases more than 7plot: 7/10 ^ Don't get me wrong for the low ratings... There is nothing wrong with the story... The world is being slowly introduced to us which is something I really enjoy^ the story is well connected and till now there is no plothole (nothing caught my eyes atleast.)^ But the low rating of this section is because author-chan it seems you forgot the title~ I mean *spoiler* it has been almost 150 chaps he din get any Disciple. *spoiler end* ^ the system hasn't been really explained... Tho it might be done in the future.. for now i dont have any ideaI mean till now I thought it's only related to disciples but suddenly we get different side missions *spoiler* about finding the core of the secret realm and then a survival quest.*spoiler end* ...characters: 8.5/10 Nothing bad... Most characters have their own quirk, but still characters could have been given a little more depth. Till now tho it's good.pacing: 9/10 ^ This is a slow paced novel. And it's really enjoyable reading this... ^ -1 maybe because i feel a little increase in pace would do good? Just my opiniondialogues: 9.5/10 Author did a good job here. People conversing here is one of the things most likeable about this novel.entertainment: 9/10 Welp this is a biased rating since it totally depends upon how much I enjoyed...Overall: 4.5/5 CC rants:-^ Well, first of all I should correct my previous review. This isn't similar to History's no. 1 founder in anyway..... This one leans more towards SOL compared to HN1F which is action packed.^ Secondly this is for ya author-chan~It's high time we have a disciple xD... ^ Also high time MC breakthrough next realm.... ^ This is for the readers... MC is little intelligent compared to other novels so you won't get irritated by his dumbness..^ And well... nothing else keep updating ?CONCLUSION:This is one of my weekly pastime... I just stack chaps to read it every weekend...And a must read if you're into SOL type novels...I'll say it once again; there is no romance, harem so to all suckers for this genre stay away... (I'm a sucker for harem and this is one of the few novels I'm reading which doesn't have harem)
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If you think you will get an evil mc no u get a hero mc
Once in a lifetime you'll come across a novel that truly captures the soul of your mind while reading something . I have to admit, I had my doubts when I first discovered this novel. After all, god of gesture Will this novel even be good? How ignorant was I to even have these thoughts. Little did I know I was about to indulge in what may have been the minutes of my life. The novel started out strong. The opening enticed me with a captivating enigma. I was so taken aback from the next-generation storyline that I almost didn't even realize the underlying symbolism in the ongoing PLOT . It wasn't until my 21 time reading of the novel where I finally got my bearings together and was able to focus on the gripping and labyrinthine stratagem. hope for the best keep updated
é meio difícil começar a ler algo de um autor que mal tem a capacidade de terminar uma novel antes de começar a escrever outras 10 sem motivo nenhum. então não sei...
Please why are chapters title after chapter 60 not Capitalized or in Block form
Good plot horrible execution ?u200d♂️ could have been written better but well you win some you lose some…………………………………………………………………………………————————-
hope it gets picked
Oh my! The writing quality is just pluperfect... I've loved this novel from the beginning and I trust that the author won't fail to impress us more with her extraordinary writing skills❤️❤️?
